A Haiku - Discouragement

So you expected all of life to be perfect?

Few have lives measured in days, so in a normal life a bad day is one day of many.  It may be that you will only remember a few of them over a lifetime.  If so, why dwell on any now?
Few have lives measured in days, so in a normal life a bad day is one day of many. It may be that you will only remember a few of them over a lifetime. If so, why dwell on any now? | Source

Discouragement now

But shake it off. Try to smile.

Funny how days come!


Leading a charmed life?

Hold your head high, Watch and see.

Happy steps lead on.


We cannot guide steps

Past every stumble and fall.

Up again! And on!


No life of bitter,

No life only sweet alone.

Master what comes now.


Mastering today,

Makes each day somehow better---

Smoothing rough edges.


Life's really rough days

Are the sandpaper of life,

Smoothing our finish.


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Copyright 2013 Demas W. Jasper All rights reserved.



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Ericdierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Just a little to melancholy harsh for me, but hey that means it touched me.


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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

Love it, poignant. Thank you for sharing. Up and awesome.


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phdast7 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Nice Haiku, Perspicacious. Hope all is well with you.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Your words are true and sensible. For me they carry hope that we can overcome adversity.


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

The last Haiku is the perfect close. I love it. Jamie


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Enjoyed your haiku. We must never be discouraged but must always do what we can to make things better.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Another round of good haiku.


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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful haiku, great expression! Thank you! Up+


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Perspycacious 3 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

All your comments have been appreciated. I have made several changes to the original in order to try to make the individual Haiku verses stand better on their own while blending together. Your comments are always appreciated.


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rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

Perfect for me. Thank you for sharing wise words.


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cam8510 3 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

This is a wonderful piece, Perspycacious, and it truly resonates with me.

Mastering today,

Makes each day somehow better---

Smoothing rough edges.

This verse goes well with my general approach to life which is One Day at a Time. Thanks for sharing this very encouraging and helpful Haiku. Sharing on my fb page dedicated to freelance writers. http://www.facebook.com/cam8510?ref=hl


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi perspycacious

"Life's really rough days

Are the sandpaper of life,

Smoothing our finish."

So true! Voted up and awesome

Wishing you a good day. :)


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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

How true! I love the last one. Voted up, awesome.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Great haiku, abrasive but inspirational :).

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