A Literary Snob


Say It's Not True!

I don't want to be a literary snob,
Doomed to sit on my hands and pitifully sob...
I want to be open to individual expression,
Gleaning content beyond critic's repression...
But if truth be told, there are certain pet peeves
that shadow my vision, when my resolve, thus, then leaves.
The critic within, with an editor's eye
Yearns for red ink to correct and defy...
Thus missing the message of purest intent,
Caught up in language that's twisted or bent.
Structure and grammar and spelling define
The vintage and taste of my literature wine.
When the message dissolves in the messenger's fare,
It's lost to this critic, who, then, quits in despair.
I hate that its true, thus, regrettably sob...
I fear I am none but a literary snob!

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epigramman 5 years ago

...well believe me there are a few of them around here at the Hub - lol lol lol - but you my friend are a breath of fresh air - so pure and genuine and sincere - and your writing has ample wit and plenty of poetic verve ......and your visits to my hubs are always always appreciated and I look forward to your flattering comments for my fragile male ego - lol lol - you know it's people like you that I feel good about writing for ......

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kathryn1000 5 years ago from London

I agree.It's great writing and illuminating on what matters

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Alayne Fenasci 5 years ago from Louisiana

This is fun! I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for sharing.

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getitrite 5 years ago

You're a good poet. Witty and clever. This is the way I feel sometimes as well.

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

I so appreciate all of your feedback! I lost my inspiration to write at all for a few years, to my great consternation...maybe I lost my confidence, I don't know. But it has been a huge boost to share some of what I wrote in younger years, and what is coming to me now, and to get such positive, lovely feedback. Thank you all!

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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Hi tnderhrt23, Really liked that. Fun but with a meaningful point.

Cheers. Michael.

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brandrocker 5 years ago

Nice work!

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Thank you, brandrocker! Nice to see you!

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daydreamer13 5 years ago

This was fun to read! Good job!

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Thanks, daydreamer13! It was a fun write, as well.

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ytsenoh 4 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

"The vintage and taste of my literature wine" was my favorite line (no rhyme intended). I agree, it was a fun read. Keep writing.

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tnderhrt23 4 years ago Author

ytsenoh, thank you, kindly! That's my favorite line too! I appreciate your visit and great comment! Happy Easter!

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