Am I boring?

 What a silly question!

How could I be?

One minute I'm swearing

and talking about being free

Next minute I'm praying

and down on bended knee

Hmmm

Life is precious

Life is painful

Am I boring?

Do I stare at you and silently sway

Or do I talk endlessly

about how my best friend is gay?

Do I seem

Like a bible preacher, teacher?

Hmm

Why?

Are we

so

different

Why

am I

so twisted?!

I think I may just be

Someone you would see

Someone you'd like to kiss

Someone you'd like to undress

Like a petal

Like a rose

Many layers for you

to unfold

Oh be bold!

I have yet more to tell you

More to show

If you want to know

So, come to me

See me for who I am

I'm everything I should be

Just be my man

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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Hey Rose, interesting poem. I'm not sure exactly what you were going for, but you expressed yourself quite well. LOL! :)


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

Thankyou Ray

This was inspired by Kimberly's http://hubpages.com/hub/A-Womans-Passion-Exoposed

I liked it alot. =)

I thought I would express myself...a bit more

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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Kimberly can be a great inspiration for a lot of people, as long as people read her writing with an open mind. ;) I know the hub you speak of, because I remember reading it before when she had a different account. :)


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

You mean not take it literally, I got that it was a fantasy not necessarily a reality.

But this is my work, my mind, and it comes naturally, it's all me. Without any thought it flowed from pen to paper.

Thankyou for you comment.

~you can read more like this @ Blondey


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Jaymeyaroch 5 years ago from Somewhere between today and yesterday.

I loved it! Go you!


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

Thankyou!


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kashmir56 5 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi Rose, thanks for sharing this super poem, i can tell by the pictures in this hub that you are not boring . I would think more entertaining ! :-)


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Dave Mathews 5 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

Nice poem. Parts of it I can recall from somewhere in time. You could never be boring.


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

Hey kashmir! Thanks. Wow :) thankyou :) Yes, I (would) prefer to be entertaining! LOL


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

Hi Dave,

Thankyou, How is everything? Can you really? Somewhere in time? I've seen that movie and I don't recall any of this in that movie!!! Anwyway....wow. Then again, now that you mention it, I do remember it better now, and I suppose maybe. You know that's a nice compliment...Anyways, yes that was a terrific movie and VERY (very) romantic btw!!!

Thankyou again, Dave. I don't know alot of boring people...ehh, actually I DO!!! Thank God we're all unique and special thou :)

Rose


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Expression is a virtue and you certainly don't appear to be boring:0) I truly believe you could keep a conversation at a gathering of kindred spirits, a joy to be around, to undress with words and share the petals as they fall.

How sweet this poem is, it left a scent of a real woman behind for a real man to follow:0)) and enjoy. Hugs from the saddlerider.


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

Awesome comment, thanks saddlerider xo !


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onrea 5 years ago from Rochester, NY

Nice abstract (at least I thought so) expression.


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

thank you onrea. It's lovely to meet you. Glad you joined hubpages!


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cceerpp 5 years ago from Ghana

It seems beautiful to me so again voted BEAUTIFUL

especially this part:

Oh be bold!

I have yet more to tell you

More to show

If you want to know

So, come to me

See me for who I am

I'm everything I should be

Just be my man :)


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

hey cceerpp, lol did I get your name right? Lol what does it stand for? :)

Yes, I think we should be ourselves. Being spiritual is important but we all have much more to share .

Glad you enjoyed! :) I enjoyed writing it;) :) :D

Hey onrea, yes it (is) abstract :) LOL! I could see, after I wrote, how it could be perceived as not, LOL!


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Stan Fletcher 5 years ago from Nashville, TN

Boring? Heck no! Not if you can write this....


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Jellybird 5 years ago

Not boring. Quite straight-forward.

ps. Iliked your comment about music these days, oh and the pic's posted. REgards


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

@Stan

Thanks a bunch mate lol :)

@Jellybird

Hey! Glad you liked this, my comment about music these day? which one? thankyou


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Druid Dude 5 years ago from West Coast

Excellent expression. Found this almost...titillating. Nice. Deep.


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

Lots of smiles today, you made my day:)thankyou!;)


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Hi schoolgirlforreal, A great poem. I really liked this.

Michael.


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ladyjojo 5 years ago

LOL

Nice poetry maam!!

How are you? hope all is well

God bless your tweet heart ;)


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA Author

michael ely,

thanks:)

@ladyjojo,

hey!

I"m doing well, talk to you soon ;)


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htodd 4 years ago from United States

The poem is really cool


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schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA Author

Hi htodd,

Thank you very much:) I'm glad you liked it!

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