And Here We Are (poem)

And here we are

A shining star

Without a scar

No fate to mar

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Amid dark pools

Where evil rules

And hands of fools

Hold all the tools

And here we are

A shining star

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A muddy stream

Without a gleam

Where poor men dream

Of self esteem

And here we are

A shining star

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Cruel rivers flow

Through hearts of woe

Which hope did know

So long ago

And here we are

A shining star

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And gutters fill

With lifeless swill

Who lost their will

In bitter chill

And here we are

A shining star

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As strangers drowned

And pasts are ground

Regrets profound

They look around

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And here we are

A shining star

Without a scar

No fate to mar

Comments 17 comments

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Theater girl 3 years ago from New Jersey

I like the repeat here. Interesting poem, and I vote useful, not useless!


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Loved this and the video! Wish daily life could go that way, probably we should try to give it a little push, huh?


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

It is a very interesting poem, with conflicting wording . . . shining star and then cruel rivers . . . and the video is truly a gem, and we all should take a hint and just do such, then wouldn't the world be a little nicer to live in?

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Brilliant work and so effective


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Good morning Dear Little Martin

The video was so moving...I have gone to youtube and am sharing it with my family as an honor to my nephew who left us too soon. He is our shining star and no longer faces the negatives our world can offer. Although he navigated the waters well and taught us how to do so as well. Thanks for this lovely sharing...

Angels are on the way this morning ps


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PHILLYDREAMER 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Sometimes having the right people in your life can get you through the worst of times.


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SidKemp 3 years ago from Boca Raton, Florida (near Miami and Palm Beach)

Thank you. May we live like a lotus blossom, roots in the mud of earth, bringing beauty to the world.


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joym7 3 years ago from United States

nice poem...


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I love this. It portrays the silver lining behind each dark cloud. Great job, Martin!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

You managed to bring tears to my eyes.

This is what it is all about. One small act kindness at a time.

Thank you,

DJ.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...Yes it would be nice if everyone felt this way....and hopefully one day maybe it will become a reality....but for now it appears it is an "I..ME " world....nice job, enjoyed the video...


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

All those clever rhymes again! I don't know how you do it, but I'm glad you do. One day! We can always hope.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Loved your clever rhyming and indeed this is a sad reality.


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Pamela99 3 years ago from United States

I really enoyed this poem with the conflicting phrases and the way they rhymed. Very clever. Voted up!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The star is always what holds us up. Thanks, Martin!


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Oh Martin!!! Oh my goodnes, I loved the poem, simply loved it... it was sweet and almost simple but so powerful and inspirational. The video!!! That was the best five minutes I've spent in my life, talk about paying in forward? This is so beautiful!!!!

Every button I can push!

Cat


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Man of Strength 3 years ago from Orlando, Fl

That was great. Very realistic. I could see every word you wrote.

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