Love can affect us without a word.

Someone Can Paint a Smile on My Heart

You´re such a dream to look at.,

You warm the depths of me.,

Penetrating my heart and soul,

Yet you, nor anyone can see.


The sun can warm me outside,

and change the colour of my skin,

But what you can do is ´´something else´´

You warm me from within.

You move towards my heart,

and paint a smile on it.,

Then you reach my soul,

and give it such a lift.


l look into your eyes again,

You haven´t moved an inch

yet what affects ,

,you´ve made happen,

Deep inside of me.

BBG x

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Dynamics 5 years ago

Wow! Dim Flaxenwick, this is hot! I like it a lot. Isn't love magical?

My favourite line is "You warm me from within."

Love this.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

l´m rather partial to that line, myself.

Thanks so much for commenting,

Take care.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Ahhh this is really precious..I loved it..

"The sun can warm me outside,

and change the colour of my skin,

But what you can do is ´´something else´´

You warm me from within"

I love those lines..thank you for sharing..

Sunnie


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Hello Sunnie, thanks so much.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago

Amazing and I can't take my eyes of the the yellow smile picture.You certainly spread the love.Thanks for being you.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

What a lovely comment. Thank you. xx


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Alladream74 5 years ago from Oakland, California

"You move towards my heart,

and paint a smile on it." These are such beautiful lines.Maybe they captivated me because i am a painter-nonetheless, they are beautiful.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Hello Alladream, That was a lovely compliment from an artist. Thank you.


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d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

What a beautiful heart warming poem. Loved it. (certainly the opposite of mine). Thanks for sharing it with us.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thanks d.william. l´m just on my way to read about schizophrenia on your page.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi Dim, 'you paint a smile on my heart' that is just so beautiful, this has to be about one very special person!


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Yep! It sure is! Thank you for coming by my page and leaving a comment.


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epigramman 5 years ago

...and your 'love' of writing can surely (always) have an affect on me .....


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thank you Epi. Always cheers me when you visit my page.


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Teylina 5 years ago

These lines are awesome, and the smiley face so perfect! I've gotta share this with two loves: my son, because he loves that kind of love, those kinds of words, and smiley faces, and, weelll, --- someone special! 'paint a smile on my heart' and 'you warm me from within' -- how much better can it get?


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

What a wonderful comment, Teylina. Thank you so much.


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vocalcoach 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Like the artist you are, you paint poetic words with just the right hues. I say "amen" to each comment left by your fans, of which I am the biggest! :)vocalcoach


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Aw this brought sunshine into my soul, you lit up my life with this one and the HUGE SMILEY face, what more can I say I felt mellow yellow all over. You had me from painting a smile on my heart, I am truly blessed and feel warmth all over. Rated UP as awesome Dim...Wink and hugs


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Hello vocalcoach... Isnt´ funny how sometimes a short little heart felt poem can mean more than realms of writing.?,. Thank you so much for your comment.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Hi saddlerider. It´s made my day to think you feel mellow yellow. (remember that song, ? years and years ago?)

love to think of you as blessed and warm. Thank you so much for your friendship and support.

Love and peace. x


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

You're so beautiful Dim! God bless!


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

You spoil me with your accolades, my friend. Love you , man. Take care.


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sonia05 5 years ago from india

amazing poem,I loved it! Love can work wonders but here you are working wonders with your great writing and I am smiling...and so is my heart!!!

cheers,

Sonia


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Great compliment. l really appreciate it. Thank you.


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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Very nicely expressed Dim Flaxenwick. Thumbs up! :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain Author

Great to see you again. Tkank you for the compliment.

Take care

Dim

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