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BLANK, IS THE THOUGHTS

THAT ONCE FED Of NEGATIVITY

LIKE THIS DEEP DARK DUNGEON OF DESPAIR

I ONCE DWELLED IN LIKE A DWARF DEEMED

DAMAGED AND DANGLED DANGEROUSLY

OFF THE EDGE OF INSANITY

BEFORE DEMENTIA

DEVOURED MY DOMINANCE AND DIGNITY

I DANCED AND DUELED WITH DEVILS THEN

DISPOSED OF MY DEMONS LIKE, A DELEGATE

WITH DUE DILIGENCE

 

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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

Proof read deepthought, will work then. Good luck from a fan.


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deepthought 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America Author

Hey attemptedhumour I do appreciate the fact if anyone comment on my hubs,and I do take everything into consideration, but it seems to my that, you only comment on hubs with mistakes why is that

"It will work


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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

All of your hubs have incredible, insightful wisdom. Your content is so interesting but your written English is not your strong suit. I comment on all your hubs and i love what you create, but i am just being honest. My two daughters proof read my hubs and notice things that i miss. That's all i am saying. You can improve your written english if you want to, but if it isn't important to you then so be it. I won't mention it again as i have made myself clear enough. I will continue to read your hubs anyway. Good luck i hope that i haven't offended you. cheers.


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deepthought 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America Author

Hey attemptedhumor I do hope you realize that I am and urban poet

that combined urban literature with old English and not a sharkespearean

writer, therefore I use urban slang (Ebonics)in my rhymes, poetry, and story’s. and yes I do make mistakes

That because my gift is to manipulate words into story's my curse is this brain disease I was bless with that keep making me forget things

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