Seasons Change--Haiku

Blustery wind blows;

Spring, Winter: battle to the death.

Bright sunshine; blue sky.

 

 

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shygirl2 5 years ago

short, but true Ms. Lizzy : D


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DzyMsLizzy 5 years ago from Oakley, CA Author

Thanks, shygirl2! ;-)


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Seeker7 5 years ago from Fife, Scotland

To the point and profound. Thanks for sharing.


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Sometimes few words carry the most weight! Thanks for the thoughts! Sweet!


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DzyMsLizzy 5 years ago from Oakley, CA Author

Hi, Seeker7 and Fossillady!

Thank you both for stopping by. I'm glad you both liked this tidbit. What is ironic is the shorter poems often take more work, thinking, tweaking and editing than the longer ones. ;-)


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, perfect exact words to describe the seasons! loved it, cheers nell


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DzyMsLizzy 5 years ago from Oakley, CA Author

Thanks, Nell! This one just came to me. ;-)


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland

Beautiful rhythm. And such a true sentiment for this time of year. Reminds me of the old religion (pagan)story about Winter Solstice when the Oak and Holly kings duel to see who would rule the next half of the year. Of course the Oak king wins so Spring and summer begin to rule and the light half of the year begins. Namaste.


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DzyMsLizzy 5 years ago from Oakley, CA Author

Hi there, Erin LeFey!

Thank you very much. That is an interesting comparison you make. I am in the process of studying the pagan ways in history, and had not yet heard that story.

Thanks for adding to my education.


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erthfrend 5 years ago from Florida

A haiku! I love haikus and am working currently on some myself! This was beautiful. Haikus have such a way of getting right to the point in such a creative way, using so few words. By the way, I love your new profile picture!


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DzyMsLizzy 5 years ago from Oakley, CA Author

Thanks much, erthfrend! I'm glad you enjoyed this bit. And thanks for the compliment on the photo! It was taken by my younger daughter...last October...at a corn maze with my grandkids. ;-)


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Lisa HW 5 years ago from Massachusetts

It sure looks like Winter is winning from where I am right now. :/


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DzyMsLizzy 5 years ago from Oakley, CA Author

Hi, Lisa HW!

LOL.. I know what you mean!

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