Dream Was Over (tanka)

The dream was over

Those vast waves which brushed his shore

Had lost their color

Still he thanked morning’s angel

For the moments to enjoy

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very dramatic, intense, reflective piece.

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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Congratulations Martin on this well done Tanka. Jamie

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

There's always something to look forward to.

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Memories are all that we are left holding.

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

There are always moments of joy to see us through the bad times. A wonderful tanka.

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful Martin...

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Lovely poem, Martin.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The sounds of truth are remarkable.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Real nice. Enjoyed.

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Those moments can be very special. Lovely poem.

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