Dreams Can Come True (limerick)

The moment she kissed him she knew

That one’s dreams can really come true

This moment in time

Was proof less sublime

Her nightmare of slime covered goo


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Ewwwwww! LOL Great one!


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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

ick icky ick! how do you come up with these?! love it.


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xstatic 3 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Another good one, if a little sticky. You are so prolific lately!


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cam8510 3 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

They don't all turn out happily ever after do they? Good one, thanks fro the laugh. But don't think we miss the talent it takes, just because we are laughing.


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

lol laughing so cute good nite my friend

debbie


Ghaelach 3 years ago

A goodnight from Deborah, and a goodmorning from Ghaelach.

An ickkkky limerick this morning Martin, to which I think you've been working with "Super Glue"

LOL Ghaelach


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cygnetbrown 3 years ago from Alton, Missouri

Oh, the disappointments of a first kiss! Well done!


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Ugh! Gross! funny!


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

This one surely tickled my funny bone today!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Ewwww! He's one of those with white stuff stuck to the sides of his mouth. Yuck!


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

I had that experience once! Up and funny...


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Tonipet 3 years ago from The City of Generals

Oh meoww.... hehe... where's that kiss... careful!Lol.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Yuckie Doo, Phew..Hee..


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Oops. That was one icky risk. Thanks for sharing, Hatter!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

OOOO Gooo lol


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Oh dear, the earth obviously didn't move, maybe next time? :). Mhatter, thanks for taking me back....NOT! :0


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QudsiaP1 3 years ago

Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :P


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

I swear that my exact comment was going to be "Ewwwwwwww....

lol..


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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

i came back to this one again to check out the comments, i am laughing soooo hard! it is one thing to write a great limerick, it is another thing all together ot get such a flood of great responses... WELL DONE!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That was excellent!


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flashmakeit 3 years ago from usa

Hahaha! Yes a nightmare is a dream that may come true.

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