...Drive Through...

That haunted, exhausted

look

so familiar

yet so foreign

to her life

as it is now

So much a part

of who she has

turned out to be.

On rainy days

She is even more

lethargic

even more pressed

for vitality

in a way that bleeds

and drains her.

An old lady looks over at her

at the drive through

She knows one day

it will be her, looking over

all the mis-spent gifts

all the wonderings

of connections

and unanswered questions

just being asked

at the drive through.

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Carole Anzolletti 4 years ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth Author

Thank you 4elements, kj force and RichusFridum...I am happy to evoke thoughts and feelings and different perspectives! I am overjoyed to share them with you and grateful for your comments :)


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RichusFridum 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

speechless


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

Carole Anzoletti...Sounds like a working mother, just trying to apease her hungry family with a varied menu of fast foods and the order taker is a senior citizen, wondering you seem so spent...after all..you did want fries with that...no???

Great hub as usual, wouldn't expect any less...have a great Autumn day..feel it in the air....


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4elements 4 years ago

thought it was great. Thanks for sharing here.

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