Empty Tears (poem)

She climbed into her lonely bed

Her fantasies still fresh in head

So empty are the tears she shed

Another dream she had instead

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Her heart repeats each word he said

Sweet promises her soul was led

In paradise the sun was spread

As waves caressed the shore

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Tomorrow’s hope he did imbed

Believe in me were thoughts he pled

How could she leave where would she go

When here was what they said search for

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Then came the instant all was shred

Was it his eyes that gave it away

Or was it some misbegotten word

She didn’t know She didn’t know

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All she can remember was

Going for something in her purse

Something to quickly end it all

Before running to the safety of her home

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She climbed into her lonely bed

Her mind mending what just happened

So empty are the tears she shed

Perhaps this madness was just a dream

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grand old lady 2 years ago from Philippines

I like this poem, especially the part that says, "she didn't know, she didn't know." After that, however, there is a change in rhythm that leaves me feeling unsettled. However, I like the last line, "Perhaps this madness was just a dream," which seems to reflect on the earlier line, "She didn't know." It's just my opinion, but it's a good poem but the structure has been better in some of your other poems.


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ImKarn23 2 years ago

she can think about it tomorrow..

After all - tomorrow is another day...

(prolly the day they come to take her away...lol)

xx


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Another impactful poem, Martin.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Truly an emotional journey.

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