Love And Eternity

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When there was darkness

In the corridors of mind;

And heart was knitting

the doubts of being

where the loneliness,

Hunted the songs of merriments;



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making me afraid of

shadows of life.

on the road of life.

I heard thy voice

The voice within me

The voice of love

The journey of light
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Which emerged within my sighs

As the colors in painters eyes

To create an eternal love;

Thy voice composed

An eternal song of love

And i found myself;

in an enchanted world.

where darkness was afraid of light


Listen that instrumental song to feel the depths of eternity.

My being emerged within you

As colors in water ,

And being gains the perfect harmony.

And the soul started its journey;

journey of light,towards eternity.


copyright©Asma iftikhar

16August 2012








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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

I like this colorful euphemism for death.. accepting the calm of the after-life.. yeah very well done asma


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I think in true love we experience eternity in many ways. Lovely work!


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asmaiftikhar 4 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Frank an Antonia for reading and commenting on my poem.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Asmaifikhar

"And the soul started its journey;

journey of light,towards eternity."

Very vivid imagery of the transition from lie to death.

Voted up and away


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rajan jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Beautifully expressed - the journey of life. Darkness giving way to the eternal light; this life to the life yonder.


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shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

Beautifully written! Yes, our inner voice plays such an important role doesnt it?

voted up!


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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

Thy voice composed

An eternal song of love

And i found myself;

in an enchanted world.

where darkness was afraid of light

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Powerful words Asma; absolutely beautiful. I loved the music you have in here. So refreshingly beautiful.


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sen.sush23 4 years ago from Kolkata, India

My new post uses the word Eternity, and so your poem came up on the page. You talk of love that merges with a being larger and beyond- and yet within bounds of our self. Lovely idea and expression. Enjoyed reading it, and so sharing it.

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