Ever Have One Of Those Days Nothing Goes Right? Part 2

Now For The Conclusion

I don't understand kids today

They all want to act tough and fight

Each week we all get together and pray

Five guys and I hum while your wife sings the most beautiful hymns

She has a voice of an angel

We can hardly keep up

I heard your wife had a cold

I was wondering how she is feeling

She surprised my wife and I with a cake

It was a homemade triple layer cake

For our 50th anniversary

We have no family left

Her and the guys is all we got

She brought tears of joy to our eyes

It was the best present ever

I was a boxer in the army in ww ll

Sorry about the black eye and the shot in the nose

You have a bad temper and are hot headed

You get mad for no reason at all

That will get you in lots of trouble

You should never hit and old man

I hope this will teach you a lesson

An old man isn't as old as he looks

Especially when a young man one fourth his age

Throws the first punch

If you are having a bad day don't take it out on anyone

You should take up singing like your wife

Make everyone happy and learn not to fight

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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Nice poem, Dream-On! I hope your day and your weekend goes better! Think positive :-)


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Yes, I truly have. Thank you for this interesting and profound write here.

Voted up++++

God bless you,

Faith Reaper


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Sparklea 3 years ago from Upstate New York

Dream On: Happy 50th anniversary!!! WOW, what a great milestone. The cake sounds delicious! I LOVE CAKE, one of my greatest weaknesses. Voted up, useful and interesting. We hub readers learn a lot about you through your genuine writing and what you share on Hub Pages.

I especially love your advice that if you are having a bad day not to take it out on anyone. I totally agree. God bless you and thank you Sparklea :)


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

kidscrafts I really did have an aweful time trying to publish this story.It reminded me not take anything or anyone for granted.So glad you came by to read.Faith Reaper What a pleasure to have you here.Just having fun in the strangest of ways.Sparklea Why wait 38 more years when I can celebrate it now.I try to find a silver lining in a bad day.Who knows maybe you will have found gold.Thanx everyone for sharing and commenting.


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Michael-Milec 3 years ago

Hi, dream-on ,

One day at the time, and you sends a message of encouragement, hope, and good will of wisdom for those who want to know more. We're not running of time, our days fly too fast, its good to be busy and leave work unfinished... ( my misconception if isn't making much sense now, someday will.)


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Michael-Milec Thinking about what you have said I have taken a few days in search for new meaning. Loving life more and more I am back refreshed and filled with more optimism. With an open heart and mind I move ahead.Thanx again.

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