Forever Paradise (poem)

There on an island in time’s endless sea

Which blooms in every blessing shared by you

Again forever paradise I’ll see

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I never knew how happy I could be

Until you gave my rainbow whole new hue

There on an island in time’s endless sea

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The world I knew grew different to me

I searched your eyes in hope of hidden clue

Again forever paradise I’ll see

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We learned to meet life’s challenge happily

And dreams we had were tales we made come true

There on an island in time’s endless sea

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Then came that day of darkest misery

I wondered by your side through mist of dew

Again forever paradise I’ll see

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I went to window hoping to be free

Where memories returned a change of view

There on an island in time’s endless sea

Again forever paradise I’ll see

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ARUN KANTI 3 years ago from KOLKATA

Thanks for such a nice piece.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Stirring and haunting piece. Interesting video.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Brilliantly described and written thanks


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

This piece is loving, happy and sad all in one. Up and beautiful.


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh Martin this digs in my soul.. so sad and hauntingly and beautiful...

Martin this is the best ever!!!!

sharing my friend

debbie


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A beautiful poem and great illustrations. Enjoyed the read.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

One never knows what time will do.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Martin, the mind's eye is the best tool to envision our dreams and recall good memories.


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Beautifully expressed-true paradise in your poem.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Thanks for the trip to paradise.


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Love and longing is wonderfully expressed in this poem. Very beautiful!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Mhatter, awesome!... the Villanelle never fails to deliver and your words are so beautiful and evocative.

Enjoy your weekend.


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia

This is lovely. I voted it up and beautiful.

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