Girl Who Loved To Cry (poem)

I never met girl who so loved to cry

When happy she’d cry she’d cry feeling sad

Severe were the tears at times she got mad

She even would cry without knowing why

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And each cut and sprain was met with a tear

A couple in love brought reason to weep

For baby she’d cry oh look it’s asleep

A hint of goodbye meant crying was near

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Some fond memory brought moments to sob

She sobbed in the sun she sobbed in the rain

She sobbed for the people starving in Spain

For every season her tears met the job

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This crying you ask why mind didn’t whirl

Reread the first line I never met girl

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Angelme566 4 years ago

A beautiful poem..crying is beautiful and healing..


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Once again, so very beautiful. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Beautiful Mhatter, just beautiful. You are so talented! Voted Awesome!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Excellent my friend, and the choice of song was spot on!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Very emotional poem! It almost made me cry.


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

cry cry cry baby cry,

or, just for experienced try!

awesome !


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Rina Pinto 4 years ago from Dubai - UAE

I was moved by the Line " She sobbed for the people starving in Spain" my heart goes out for people who starve all over the world, while we who has been favored or Blessed with Provision of Food, we waste or eat like gluttons. We never dare to think of them that starve for food to death. We say beautiful words for the Starving & dying but who really cares from their heart and do a Beautiful thing of sending them food or money or the best going to that country and its people that are starving. People give people who already have, they never one a bit hesitate to throw the food in the thrash.

Excellent Poem from your heart. God Bless you dear!


LikaMarie 4 years ago

Love the poem. Here is another video, though not as good as the one you posted.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8_FVAEYRM5I


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Ooooo...tricky one, M! Me gusta!


KDuBarry03 4 years ago

It was so beautiful throughout the whole piece...until the final line. Great comical twist, Mhatter! Loved this poem :)


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Excellent Job and I loved how you ended it with a funny twist!!


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Once again a beautiful poem. Voted up!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Ha Ha - Very sneaky and I did have to go back and reread the first line. You got me.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

M, great poem and great song - I've always loved Dinah - remember the duet she sang with Brook Benton (the name of the song escapes me at the moment, but I loved it). Voted up!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

I'm glad you got the tie and twist


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Well I had to go back and read the first line again. I like your style of writing..Cool.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I think we have met people like her at one time or another.


Janhorner 4 years ago

Your poem was most unusual and the image of the lady sobbing her heart out was an excellent choice! I love the song; remember it well. I was brought up with this kind of music; Nat King Cole, Bing Crosby, Mat Monroe, Shirley Bassey etc. Great artists, who had real talent!

Just one question, how many tissues does this lady go through in a month?

Jan


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

Keep up the good work. WHOA!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

No wonder there are sayings like cry me a river and I bet this girl could. Liked this.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Very nice! Liked the ending and the song too.

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