Accuracy of Love..

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One day,

I decided to imagine,

the accurate definition,

of the act, to which,

we call LOVE.

I began to wander,

in thoughts,

found myself,

in a city,

the very hi-tech city,

love was expressed,

on mobile,

physically love,

was carried on,

with some one,

net-chatting,

was going on,

with another one,

and mobile love,

was continued,

with third one.



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I thought.

Oh, what a courage !,

could not believed,

this wonder,

this technical,

aspect of love,

gave me,

a new principle,

Love is nothing,

but a mind game.


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Next day,

I read in a news paper,

a lover was cheated,

by three,

so called lovers,

I closed my eyes,

began to think,

this is an era,

in which,

Love,

not to be loved,

by heart,

to love,

apply mind,

and I found ,

the definition of love.

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I thought,

what will be future,

of those antique,

fundamentals of love,

when love was,

a sacred deed,

supposed to be,

next to GOD,

when it was,

performed by souls,

what will be,

the sacrifice,

when,

lots of lovers,

ruined their lives,

for their true love,

thousands of years ago.

A highly technical,

lover ,

shouted,

the fossils of lovers,

reside in,

monuments,

meant only,

for visiting places,

where the real,

and true love,

cries for its existence.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

haha...good...so practical..you have made a serious attempt saying some truth in life and starting being on that side...good!


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AUPADHYAY 5 years ago from INDIA, UTTAR PRADESH STATE, KANPUR CITY Author

Thanks for your comments. I am much pleased if you suggest me about the mistakes while writing my hubs. Your valuable suggestions are eagerly awaited. Thanks again.


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nu-flowerchild 5 years ago from Baton Rouge, Louisiana

This poem makes me think. I think of it as a complex poem about love and the human condition. People write love poems all the time, but this is one of those love poems that do not follow a cliche. :)


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AUPADHYAY 5 years ago from INDIA, UTTAR PRADESH STATE, KANPUR CITY Author

Thanks for your comment. I really intend to try for making alive the vanishing aspects of natural human affection amongst us. Thanking you again for your comments.


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HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

So very true, we have lost the sacredness of love and true meaning of love. :)


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AUPADHYAY 5 years ago from INDIA, UTTAR PRADESH STATE, KANPUR CITY Author

In fact, love is defined now a days, in such a way that it is necessity or like a symbol of enjoyment. But the soul of love is being vanished in this fast moving culture of the society. Thanks for your comment.


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VENZKHVAM 5 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

UPADHAYAJI,

You have very good knacking of writing and you are really doing good. today reality of love expressed nicely


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Kari Winchester 5 years ago from Ontario, California

thought provoking, elements of truth. thank you for publishing this.

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