Her Tears (poem)

She bares her broken heart with passing breeze

Which tarries just to listen for a while

To bring some comfort to forgotten smile

And stroke her hair to bring her mind some ease

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She speaks to it of love that was so vile

A barren desert feeding off her pleas

His promises were only words that tease

What once was she was stolen by his guile

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The gentle breeze then whispered girl to sleep

With fragrant scents from Joyous yesteryear

And wiped away the tears which bore her pain

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The breeze to storm with vengeance it must reap

Upon the source of tears he didn’t hear

Which will forever cover him with rain

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Motherbynature 4 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

Beautiful.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I don't know which was better, your poem or your choice of songs. Both were great!


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heavenleigh707 4 years ago from The Invincible Heart of Neverland

Thank you. Empathy, bittersweet and compassionate. I love it.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Another love gone by. Bluesy, my friend. Voted up.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Sentimental poem and the music video was unique!


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

This one was filled with passion and self love, I dug it, nice poetry bro, voted up and out!

It reminds me of a break up I had many years back, with a lady who didn't want to let go, but we must grow in differing directions at times, in this life. Sometimes for the better as well, I like how this flows overall as well smooth jazzy flow, when read with the music in the video simultaneously. Nice!


Janhorner 4 years ago

Sad yet beautiful. Endearing words. You write such lovely poetry.

Jan


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Martin this is one of the best pieces I've read of yours. This story is so sad, and I know that man deeply regretted letting things end that way.


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

The painful story has an awesome portrait, Great job.


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pennyofheaven 4 years ago from New Zealand

Wow powerful stuff. Thanks


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Another wonderful poem. You are able to touch someone's heart. Not all poets can do that.

Voted up.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Classy beautiful and hauntingly sad, Nina's just heart wrenching. Well done.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Loved this beautiful poem and video !

Awesome !


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Sad in a way. Good reflection on a woman's feelings after a love has gone.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

We have all felt used up like this upon occasion. Your words captured it perfectly.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Exceptional writing. Simply beautiful. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful. I salute you...Cheers


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Your creative poetry is as awesome as your choice in music!


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

"With fragrant scents from Joyous yesteryear"...sigh..the older i get the more i think of yesterday - is that called living in the past? Beautiful, Martin..

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