Hiding In Moments (tanka)

Hiding in moments

Stories of another page

Never quite finished

A star floats in its heaven

So unsure of what it was


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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

Up, awesome and beautiful. It speaks to me of how a poem emerges. Thank you for that, MHatter99.


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Wow, this really sticks with me and makes me think; how you can say so much with so few words is truly amazing.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Very nice Martin.


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Great one.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Another real thinker, Martin. I had to read it a few times. Nice!


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Amazing as always.Your style is trenchant and direct to the point.Voted up


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Powerful and deep..Love it!!


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

So beautifully composed !


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Dear Martin

Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Dear Martin

Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Loved it!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Great use of words and they are put together so well.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

This is just so lovely.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Sounds like a nova to me. Great work.


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Makes me think of literal stars in space and of human famous stars.

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