I Knew You Were the One

Our love will never die
Our love will never die


This is my first hub and indeed my very first poem, that is since I was at school! I have always loved poetry and adore receiving poems written especially for me. I have never considered writing a poem myself, let alone publishing it for people to read! I have however been persuaded to write one by one of the hubbers on here! So thank you Amorea13 for giving me a gentle nudge!



I Knew You Were the One


The first time I saw you

I knew you were the one


Your voice, your words

A dream come true

My heart began to melt

As you looked deep into my eyes,


Your gentle touch

And soft persuasion

Our first lingering kiss

Always I will remember,


Our nights of passion

Sensual moments

Feeling you close to me

Till the break of day,


Magical moments

Privately shared

Our hearts entwined

Always together,


A love like ours

Will last forever

Through life’s

Smooth or rocky path,


Memories played back

A video in my mind

How I long to touch you

Caress you once again,


True love never dies

Its richness seeps

Through every cell

A feeling of emotion,


The first time I saw you

I knew you were the one!


Comments 157 comments

ralwus 6 years ago

Well, welcome to HP and keep writing. I do hope this love lasts.


amorea13 6 years ago

Acaetnna what a great 'start' to your poetry-writing career! Brilliant!

The line, "Its richness seeps through every cell," is a super line and shows right there how you know how 'words' work'! That line has imagery and rhythm in every syllable. More please!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you for your welcome ralwus. I will endeavour to continue to write. I guess the first one to actually get started is always the hardest and now I have done that! I shall definitely be reading your hubs too.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello amorea13 and thank you for your kind remarks. At least one of my lines was worth reading! It is truly a wonderful skill to be able to choose the correct words to convey true feelings and stimulate the emotions. I think that the poems that I have read written by you do just that. I will endeavour to keep practising!


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blondepoet 6 years ago from australia

Oh you know I am a sucker for love. Ahhhh that was just beautiful acaetnna.


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Mighty Mom 6 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

Lovely and very, very brave to launch your hP career with a poem! Hooray!!! I think your top photo looks like Boston (near the swan boats). Or at least, that's the romantic memory it evokes for me!

MM


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you Mighty Mom you are very kind. I confess I have been feeling rather out of my depth here amongst all these great writers. I will certainly be checking out your hubs.Thank you again for leaving a comment.


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

acaetnna what a wonderful spin on verse. Your love is showing very well. It brought me back to my days as a young man when I was so attractive to love and my first kiss or date. I was a puppy dog in love and wanted to stay with my girlfriend forever and never leave. My heart was so filled with passion. Oh to be that young again:0)and relive those feelings.

I loved your first hub and welcome you to the Hubs, I look forward to reading much more from you. Enjoy it here you will meet many talented writers and your creative juices will flow. Thank you for the follow I am following you as well. Peace and hugs.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you for your comments saddlerider. I think you are a complete romantic and I don't think that you will ever age. You know the way to a woman's heart through the words that you use. I am in total awe of your hubs and I shall return to read some more. Yes I think I will enjoy it on here especially as I will meet kind and talented writers such as yourself. I have never considered myself to be a writer but am willing to learn. I so love a man who can use words so beautifully. I really do appreciate a man of your immense talent taking the time to write to me. Thank you again. Peace and lots of hugs to you too.


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epigramman 6 years ago

...well I knew you were the one from the moment I read these stirring words of bonding and commitment with a very attractive arrangement of words - you write like me in the sense that you keep it simple and get right to the point without too many distractions - and let's face it -

the simple fact of the matter is love is the greatest gift of them all - and it's a gift that you have given us!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh wow epigramman I am enjoying being here more and more. Truly such kind words from such an authority as you, I am really touched and simply over whelmed by your kindness. Yes love is the greatest gift of all and I would love someone to share my love with. Thank you so much for taking the time to write your comments - you just don't know how much it means to me. Thank you.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hi acaetnna, thank you for the lovely poem here. So moving and full of emotion. There is nothing like that sense of knowing when you have met that person who is "The One" and your souls intertwine. That special person is someone we recognise because sometimes our heart sees it before our head sees it. I do hope this love lasts, and I wish you happiness for the future. Welcome to Hub Pages, I really like your writing. You will flourish here! :)

(Thank you for the comments on my hub too, that is nice of you.) Take care.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Astra Nomik thank you for stopping by. I confess to being a complete novice to this, but people such as yourself, have been so encouraging that I feel more and more that yes, actually, I have words to say. Yes, he is a special person and always will be to me.Whether I can have complete happiness again, who knows?! I hope so. Thank you.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

You make your words come alive.You share love so well.Thank you for making me smile today.I enjoy a love that I try to hold but never can quite put my finger on it.You help me on my journey.Have an inspired day.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

What wonderful comments Dream On - thank you and I am thrilled that I made you smile today. It is such a joy to share words with each other. I shall be over to your hubs right away.


akaibara 6 years ago

Hi acaetnna

I stumbled upon to your hub when searching.

A beautiful poem which touched my heart. Thank you. It is hard to believe that this is your very first one, well done to you.

I will be joining soon to follow you. Although I am not a poet I love reading poems.

Keep going beautiful lady!


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

I came back just to enjoy your words and the wonderful pictures of love.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Dream on, you are so lovely thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Akaibara, I would definitely encourage you to join. I adore reading other people's poems, especially love poems. I only joined to read the hubs but I was encouraged to write by one of the hubbers. I thought that I would have a go and I've managed it! Okay not as slick and polished as the really great poets on here but I am having a go and enjoying it. So here's giving you a gentle push!!


hubpageswriter 6 years ago

Beautiful poem here.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

Your poems are super sweet and the special people you have in your life are truely blessed to have you as a friend.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Hubpageswriter, I so appreciate that.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Dream On you touch my heart, thank you. I certainly think the same words apply to you.


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Lovingu 6 years ago from London

This is so lovely. I can't believe this is your first poem. Brilliant. Will now check out Amorea13! Thanks Acaetnna.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Lovingu.


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Terrylee5151 6 years ago from Pennsylvania

Wow!!! I am speechless. How beautifully you write and the pictures add a wonderful touch.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh Terrylee5151 I so appreciate your comments. Many thanks for reading this poem.


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epigramman 6 years ago

....I knew you were the one because your hubs have just been viewed over 1000 times ... congratulations - you certainly deserve it - if life were based on having a great attitude and an open mind - you would breathe life for the rest of us ....... and let us know how to live!!!


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

You are such a very romantic person! I love your poems, they make me dream of my husband even if he's beside me! lol! Thanks for sharing! =)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well Epigramman what can I say? You just know how to flatter a girl! Thank you I so appreciate your comments.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

What a lovely thing to say DjBryle, thank you. Yes I am very romantic and the love of my life is equally so. So I am really blessed.


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Darlene Sabella 6 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

I am glad I came back for another read, very nice and charming. Welcome to hubpages friend, let's have fun and write write and write....passion in your words awesome


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Darlene for your awesome comments. I am loving your hubs too. Speak again soon.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

"The first time I saw you, I knew you were the one!"

I'll never hear those words! Great poem! Congrats with that special one"! God bless!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

More wonderful comments from you Micky Dee, thank you SO much.


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Lovingu 6 years ago from London

Just had to come for another visit, awesome.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Lovingu, would love to visit your hub.


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Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

Beautiful and I am pretty envious of this man. You are just so romantic.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well thank you Secretmission that is kind of you. I just write what I am feeling in my heart.


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warm_whispers 6 years ago

thump up this what i can offer here


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Many thanks Warm_whispers although I don't quite understand what you mean?!


Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

Nicely written. This flowed very well. My only suggestion would be to think about discarding the exclamation point after the second line. The line may carry more weight without it.


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Pinkchic18 6 years ago from Minnesota

Beautiful poem, very well written!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much for the suggestion Doug Turner, I actually do see what you mean and will change it. Thanks for the advice, I appreciate that.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I appreciate you stopping by and leaving comments PInkchic18, thank you.


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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

That is such a simple but effective way to say such a lot about one emotion. Lovely again. Cheers


NikiiLeeReyes 6 years ago

Aww how sweet; absolutely lovely!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Attemptedhumour, this was my very first poem on Hubpages so I guess it was quite simple!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Aww thanks NikiiLeeReyes.


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Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

Just had to come here again to feel the emotions of your beautiful words.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank yo Secretmission I so appreciate that.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

What an honor to read your first work on love here at HubPages. Your a gifted poet and I look forward to your beautiful expressions and work. Best Wishes and Much Success :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow I so appreciate your feed back Katie - thank you so much.


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ellacor 6 years ago

You have a definite skill with words. I cannot believe this was your very first poem, well done to you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You are so kind Ellacor, I just tried to pour my heartfelt emotions onto paper (well computer screen perhaps!)


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Winsome 6 years ago from Southern California by way of Texas

Wonderful first effort Acaetnna, I still remember writing my first song--walking around my dorm room with a guitar which I had just learned to play--it was a love song and not terrible at all...now if I could just remember the words. =:)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Now Winsome I am sure you can remember the words, well at least you would remember the tune anyway. I bet you were so proud of your achievements too. How wonderful to be able to write songs, did your first love inspire you to write it I wonder? I so appreciate you taking the time to read my hub, many thanks Winsome.


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ZulmaDear 6 years ago from TheCrosses, LasCruces

WoW! your poetry is beautiful! your words melt my heart and encourage me to find true love. :) i can just submerge myself in your poetry. Snaps and Claps


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you ZulmaDear - I am now off to read your hubs. I so appreciate your comments and for you stopping by.


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chertay 6 years ago

Just wanted to say thanks for sharing, I quite enjoyed this poem.

Cheers,

Cort


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Chertay, this was my first poem on Hubpages. actually it was my first poem ever! So glad you stopped by.


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

Great first hub. You express yourself very well. I rated this 'up'. Welcome to Hubpages, BTW :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thanks Denise. I had a go thanks to Amorea13's gentle nudge! I am glad he persuaded me to write.


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kookoo88 6 years ago from Cripple Creek

I really like your poems. :) I'd love to see you continue to write them. You have a lot of beauty in your heart and it's definitely worth sharing with the world. :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thanks Kookoo ... I hope I can continue writing poetry. I shall do my best especially if people like you come to read them and get enjoyment. Take care.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

This is great the second time around too!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am honoured that you chose to come back here again - thanks Micky I am so pleased and grateful for your following.


carrieg 5 years ago

this was very good. I cant write poams if my life depended on it. but now I know where to come when I need one. lol

thank yoi


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Great to have you here Carrieg - sweet comment but you know I didn't think I could write poems either, this was in fact my first one ever. So just have a go ... you can do it!


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epigramman 5 years ago

....well it's always a good thing to revisit the classics - and I knew you were the one when I first read this a little while back - you are the one who is so special to all of us who gladly follow you - our resident love doctor and a young lady who is sweeter than any chocolate easter bunny with words begging to be part of her poetic craft!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Epigramman I am sure that I really don't deserve your wonderful comments - but I love them all the same - thank you - you are an absolute angel and are so good for a girl's self esteem!


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pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

Oh you are just too too Good! I agree with saddlerider it reflects who you are this poem. A soulful loving person. Thanks enjoyed your hub immensely


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

That is a very kind comment to make, thank you so much Pennyofheaven (great name by the way!)Great to see you here.


as4ra 5 years ago

Great use of imagery, i love it and so can relate. This poem is simply beautiful! :) Great Job!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you so much visiting and commenting As4ra. I hope you'll visit again. I am off to read yours hubs now. Take care.


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

How lovely. This poem really hits the spot in so many ways. It flows, it's sincere, it's incredibly optimistic. Well done.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow thank you Twilight Lawns, I so appreciate your comment.


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MarionAnn 5 years ago from Vancouver Island, BC

I love your love poetry! I'm a hopeless romantic :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks MarionAnn, we are both hopeless romantics - it's so great isn't it!


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aware 5 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

very cool . excellent first.

ray


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Aware, I appreciate that.


TattoGuy 5 years ago

Just decided to go back and read your very first hub and guess what I like about it. Reading the feelings of love through a womans eyes, which is why I enjoy your writing, makes me feel your feelings. Not that I want to be a woman in love lol but you know what I mean.

To encapture your reader so that they live the written words is a skill not many have, you do as does another female poet you would like as she writes similar to you, Chrissie123, you would like her !

http://hubpages.com/@chrissie123


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so pleased that my words allowed you to enjoy and feel my feelings of love through a woman's eyes. I so appreciate your lovely comments TattoGuy. I will definitely go straight over to check out Chrissie, thank you so much for suggesting that I read her work.


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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Like hearts

drawn upon the sand

our poetry is fleeting

a glimpse

a subtle glance

washing over us in waves

written

where others

can feel the flow

without getting wet themselves


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh wow what beautiful words, thanks Hillrider.


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lisadpreston 5 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

I'm not into poetry much but when I read this, you brought tears to my eyes. My husband passed away in 07 and when I first saw him, I knew he was the one. I cannot stop grieving for him. This month, January was the anniversary of his death and I think I died with him. The poem was lovely and it surely touched my heart.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you Lisadpreston. You brought tears to my eyes too when I read your comments. My heart goes out to you and I simply can't imagine just how you feel. Please don't die with your husband, hang on to those wonderful memories. He would want you to live life to the full and to cherish every moment. You will be with him again, but not just yet, he wants you to experience more in your life before joining him. I feel for you so much but time is a great healer and you should draw comfort knowing that he is always in your heart. God bless you and thank you so much for touching my life.


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Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Hello, Acaetnna. You did great job and for first poem, this one really sweet and lovely. Keep writing, dear. I would love to read more. ^_^


ariasnote 5 years ago

Good poem about love and relationships. :D Thanks for sharing it with us.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Freya, it wasn't easy writing my first poem but everyone has been so supportive and encouraging. Thank you for visiting.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks for the visit and comment Ariasnote I so appreciate that.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

I once felt this possibly a decade ago. Every word you mentioned is what it feels like. I can remember that day like if it was yesterday. thank you for shinning a light on my first love :)

bella


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Ah thank you Bellawritter - they are wonderful feelings aren't they. One never forgets them.


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

I knew you were the one brought me back to another time that I'll never forget when I met me dear husband! We melted much like that! Thanks for sharing!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes those very first moments never forgotten. Thank you for your visit an comment Fossillady.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

This is very sweet, and adorable.

i wish i believed in "the one", but I believe love comes in stages, and can be equally wonderful each time.

I enjoyed this, thank you :]


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you for reading my very first poem and commenting BenWritings. I shall be over to check out your hubs too.


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Lady_E 5 years ago from London, UK

Lovely Poem...

Indeed, True Love never dies. It's so strong. :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

You are so right Lady_E TRUELOVE never dies, it stays in our hearts forever. Thank you so much for visiting.


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toknowinfo 5 years ago

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. This is a great first hub, and I am glad you have shared so many more writings on hubpages.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Toknowinfo thank you so much. It was interesting to read my very first hub here again today! I shall be back to see you on your hubs shortly.


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

acaetfnna, you are a truly gifted writer. All I can say is WOW. Rated up and beautiful.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

KoffeeKlatch Gals that's awesome and I so appreciate your visit and of course your comment.


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The Jet 5 years ago from The Bay

That was lovely. Good job.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks The Jet I appreciate that.


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Leptirela 5 years ago from I don't know half the time

Once again a beautiful read :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Leptirela thank you , you are awesome!


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sherrylou57 5 years ago from Riverside

Beautiful poem acaetnna!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Sherrylou57, it was the first poem that I ever wrote!


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sherrylou57 5 years ago from Riverside

I love poetry! Keep up the awesome writing!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Sherrylou thank you, I will continue to do my best, love is such an inspiration for poetry writing.


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vocalcoach 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

How did I miss this lovely hub? And it is even more special knowing that it was your first one. You are, indeed, the love goddess. I haven't figured out whether love inspires you - or you inspire love!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Vocalcoach. I hadn't been back to this very first poem for sometime and I am amazed that this poem and the kind comments from fellow hubbers, inspired me to continue to write poetry about love.


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia

For this to be your very first poem, this is very good. I can see how your poetry has bloomed into true beauty. You have a gift and it is poetry. Always follow your heart and hold on to it.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Thelyricwriter - wow what a wonderful comment, thank you so much. I wrote this poem as a response to Amorea13 who actually truly inspired me. I appreciate that this poem is rather rough around the edges but it has inspired me to continue writing. Thank you Amorea13, without you I would be a shadow of the past. Sadly Amorea13 ( a true inspirational poet)is no longer a writer on HubPages but I shall be eternally grateful to him.


Website Examiner 5 years ago

I had to go a bit back in time, through the archives, to discover your True Soul. Well, but you have been consistent in your commitment to values such as: A relationship that starts with love at first sight; the physical relationship is important, but perhaps mostly as a sign of deep affection and caring for one another; the relationship should be durable. All very nice!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow this really is such an amazing comment Website Examiner - you totally see where I am coming from. Love is indeed a very deep affection and our love is totally durable and in fact becomes stronger and stronger minute by minute. I am so, so fortunate to have experienced and am still experiencing LOVE such as this. Thank you so much for taking the time to find out the roots of my poetry. I so appreciate your comment.


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Royalmark 5 years ago from Lagos, Nigeria

The first time I saw you Acaetnna, I knew you were a good writer+poet.

Nice poem. Rated up!

RM.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Ha ha thank you Royalmark. I have to say that this was my first attempt and all of these wonderful comments have inspired me to continue. I appreciate your caring words, thank you so much.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Well this being your poem since school..just beautiful...love your poetry..debbie


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Deborah I so appreciate your comment, very, very much - thank you.


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GmaGoldie 4 years ago from Madison, Wisconsin

Your beauty shines through. Absolutely beautiful. My husband I feel is my soulmate so this poem hits home. Thank you!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

GmaGoldie I am so pleased that you can relate to this poem and I am SO pleased that another couple feel this way - it is totally awesome isn't it?!!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

wow.. sweet.. and i love the way you stream the words...:) Frank


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Frank, you are very kind. This was my first poem so I can see many flaws in it!


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TIMETRAVELER2 4 years ago

What a sweet poem. Nothing like love to lift the heart!!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

You're right in my opinion Timetraveler2, love completely lifts the heart. Thank you for your visit.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

What a tender way to open your heart to poetry--lovely!


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

AudreyHowitt, thank you.


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

A beautiful and very tender poem.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Christin53 - thank you.


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Secret lies 4 years ago from Redlands California

You know how I knew what a Muse could be. How your loving g heart just. Pulls endless rainbows of true love. Your smile makes me smile too. I just hop to one day inspire such a lovely heart of pure love.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Secret Lies, your poetry has the power to inspire anyone that encounters true love. Thank you for your visit.


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Secret lies 4 years ago from Redlands California

his way i am

her


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Secret Lies, but I am unsure what you are saying!


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Secret lies 4 years ago from Redlands California

ust the we are none sh \e is me and aia am her


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

I don't understand! Have you been drinking?!


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Secret lies 4 years ago from Redlands California

not allrealy


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Mmmm


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi acaetnna, a very beautifully written poem and the words say so much to paint a picture of those moments !

Vote up and more !!!

Have a awesome weekend my friend !


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Well Kashmir - how awesome to hear from you - thank you. Lots of love xxx


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow - thank you_ Kashmir xxx


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epigramman 4 years ago

175 comments here Sally - that is remarkable - and I'd thought I'd start at the very beginning - and you were the one whom inspired me to write lovey dovey poetry more than anyone else - so in a way you have been my muse - and a favor to ask of you - please check out my love poem to my girlfriend Sannel in one of my latest - If for only one day(I could take away your pain) - I think it's my best one yet and it's straight from my heart - Happy Canada Day to you from lake erie time 6:09pm


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Epi you are awesome, thank you. You have inspired me too, inspired me to carry on and write poetry even though I didn't really consider my words good enough. I have learned so much from you. I have read your latest love poem and you are certainly very romantic and I can tell that you speak from your heart. Wonderful. The heart is more powerful than any other muscle and we feel complete love in our hearts first of all. Love is so wonderful when it is fully reciprocated. You are a genius Epi, you are a friend for life and I for one, amongst so many others, love what you bring to HubPages. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.


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epigramman 4 years ago

beautiful words Sally and I feel the very same about you as my friend and esteemed colleague and the most personal love poem I've written I would like you to read if you can - I wrote it to my ladyfriend Sannel - If for only one day I could take away your pain - have a read of it if you can - Sannel printed it out and has read it over more than 20 times she said - that makes me proud because I really do love her. lake erie time canada 7:55pm


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epigramman 4 years ago

lol lol - I see that you just read it when I went back to epi's house - lol - what a lovely suprise - yes I thought you would like that one - and written from the heart and when you're in love, as you know, the words always flow easier ...... lake erie time 7:59pm


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so happy that you are truly in love - it is such an awesome feeling and unless one is able to experience this in their heart it is impossible to imagine. You and I are the lucky ones!


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epigramman 4 years ago

...yes we are Sally and I was also lucky to meet someone as beautiful and talented and nice as you - and you've become one of my best buddies here at the Hub over the last 2 years - lake erie time 4;50pm


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

You're amazing Epi and I love you more than you will ever know. Simply, thank you for being you. xx I wish you luck, love and happiness always; you SO deserve it!


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blondey 4 years ago

Beautiful poem :)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Blondey.


Rayne123 3 years ago

That is a great poem especially for your first one. Is that you and your bf in the picture.

By the way, in the picture you posted you kind of look like Valeria Bertnellia.

Have a good day


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Rayne123 - thank you. Do I ? I am not really sure who she is!! Hope it's a compliment!!!


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GmaGoldie 3 years ago from Madison, Wisconsin

You are truly an artist. Very heartfelt, voted up and beautiful. Your writing reminds me James Kavanaugh. His writing always moves me and takes me to a dimension.


Rayne123 3 years ago

Oh my God ok how old are you, I feel old now

She was the one that played on the sitcom in the 80's i think "one day at a time" and now she acts on "hot in cleveland" with Betty white, if you know who she is.

her name is actually spelled Bertinelli, go look at pictures of her and yes it is a compliment, ask any guy

Have a good night

PS great hub again and yes as you said, love is all around, with love everything else falls in place.

Laurie


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow GmaGoldie, thank you, what a wonderful comment. No we are not in the picture, he hates having his photo taken!! Thank you again so much, I shall now pop over to read your hubs.


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford Author

Sorry you feel so old ... I am sure that you are not! I am sorry I think it's because I am from England that I have not heard of her!! I will check her out to see what you mean! In the meantime thank you so much for stopping by and commenting!!

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