I Know What I Want

Two Comments To Go Please

I am in a hurry

I can't wait

Can you make that as fast as you can

There was a line and I impatiently waited my turn

I thought I would never get here

I thought I would come early but then again so did everyone else

I will take it to go

I have a big day ahead of me and this is my first stop

I have never said so many I's at one time

I am on a roll

Thanx again and I am off

To a world where somebody cared to say hello

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

This wonderfully written piece hold hints of my tendancies. Some I need to work on - like slowing down and enjoying the ride.

Deep and awesome.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

shiningirisheyes I think wouldn't it nice to see two comments a day.Hearing from people all around the world.Then again we are so busy and want to rush rush.It is time to slow down and enjoy life.I love it I got two comments today and both are from you.Thanx so much for reading and sharing.


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

DREAM ON.. hopefully I will make it three.. one ..very original..two..describing society to a " T"...and three.. 15 I's..and only ONE little ole me...enjoyed..


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

kj force What a wonderful witty answer you made me smile.Thanx so much.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Short and sweet. Liked this.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee Just a little fun humor to split up the day.Thanx so much for reading.

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