I will learn by my mistakes

I will learn by my mistakes


       In the silence of everynight ,

The wind , it speaks to me,

Although it is out of sight,

It whispers, it taunts me,

While I lay in bed, While i try clear My Mind,

Its blows in memories, Those I left behind.


They flood in Like storms

and they crash like waves

They sting like swarms

They torture , I am their slave

They pain my head

And they play and they play

they rock my bed

As I lay as I lay


I want to scream But words refuse to leave

I know I have made mistakes But wind  why do you make me Grieve

I should Have said this, I should Have done that

"But these things can not be changed " I spat !

Life does not come with a guide and it does not run smooth

"I will learn from my mistakes" I whispered, trying to not be rude

So it stopped, and let me rest

Thank you wind, for showing me my best

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Angel_In_Disguise 5 years ago Author

Wow this feedback is truely amazing really made me feel great thank you all so much please keep reading !


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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Really enjoyed this poem. Will have to see what else you have to share.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Such imagery and emotion through your words. Loved it and I am so pleased I found you.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

The voices come at night to set things right!


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GusTheRedneck 5 years ago from USA

Howdy Angel - What a terrific poem. Loved it! It is interesting to be abed and have the wind pay a visit. You just never know what it is going to bring along with itself, do you?

Gus :-)~


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sofs 5 years ago

So full of imagery and emotion.. beautiful!

We always learn more from our mistakes than from doing things right.. Best wishes to you!


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Mr Nice 5 years ago from North America

Hi Angel_In_Disguise,

I liked your poem very much and I express my feelings in the form of my favorite quotes.

“I think we all wish we could erase some dark times in our lives. But all of life's experiences, bad and good, make you who you are. Erasing any of life's experiences would be a great mistake.” Luis Miguel

~Life is like a combination lock;your job is to find the right numbers, in the right order so you can have anything you want.~


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fastfreta 5 years ago from Southern California

Very beautiful and very good Angel_in_disguise. Welcome to HubPages, I'll be looking out for more of these wonderfully written poems.

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