If I Never See The Sun

I took her to my home
Still I forgot her name
She was a problem child
But I wanted to play her game

If I never see the sun
I won’t be losing again
Because the parting light
Means the heartache begins

I never know which drink
Is the one before too many
But I know why the sun shines
On a room that is empty

You made every mistake
That a woman can make
I know all your flaws
But whose heart is gonna’ break?

If I never see the sun
I won’t be losing again
Because the parting light
Means the heartache begins

I wonder if a woman
Can feel a man while she sleeps
My eyes won’t leave her alone
She doesn’t know I’m playing for keeps

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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Loved this write--and loved the use of the repetitive stanza--makes us feel this has happened with some chronicity--lovely write!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

lovely poem...


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The Suburban Poet 4 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Audrey - Thank you. I appreciate it. Hey are you on Hellopoetry?

@raciniaw - Thank you again! You are too good to me!

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