If you were a girl [Poem]

If you were a girl

you could know that sometimes the meaning of a goodbye is don't go away

If you were a girl

you could know that a hairpin in the car is an inducement

If you were a girl

you could know that the sweetest strokes are on the hair

If you were a girl

you could know that a Disney movie isn't just a movie

If you were a girl

you could know that good night and good morning aren't just words, but promises

If you were a girl

you could know that an eternal love story might be hidden in a song

If you were a girl

you could know something more


Have you ever thought to be somebody else?

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wonderful1 4 years ago from Southern California

Inspiring and beautiful. I like the symbols you used.


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andsoforth 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Very very nice, Lorenzo. I quite like it.


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Nice list and interesting idea here. Up!


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mary615 4 years ago from Florida

Very nicely done!


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time2rite 4 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

A very beautiful write, Lorenzo. It's amazing how little acts speak volumes more than mere words alone!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Interesting thoughts....


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suzzycue 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

I enjoyed the line good morning and good night are promises. I never realized that before. Well done. Great poem about a girl from a guy's point of view.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

I enjoyed the poem, especially as it is a girl speaking but written by a guy, usually I seem to read ones that are the other way around. I thought you handled it very well.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

i love being a girl but i really can't get away with jealousy...awesome...


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Beautiful and very interesting... Voted up.

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