A Great Pain

I’m in a closed-room and alone,

I don’t know what I must do

I cried gallons of tears day by day

I bended my knees for you to stay

I hold you tight but you walked away


You left me crying and I’m dying

Like other men, I’m just a man

I need someone who could care

Someone who is really strong

Even loving me is a wrong!


I am empty and I am lonely!

I’m stupid since this heart is bleeding

I can’t stop it and its aching

No one really cares for me

And no one gives love to me


It’s raining and I’m glad you’re here

You brought me an umbrella with boots

You bring my handy bag and papers

And all I thought it is happening

I’m very sad as it’s just a nightmare!


You can call me desperate as I am!

You can hit my head with hard stuff

My heart is broken into tiny pieces

And I’m afraid to love once more

For this I bet, I can be fooled!


Could you please heal this heart?!

Could you hear the beat of my heart?!

Could you really feel my love?!

Could you fill the emptiness in my heart?

Now young man, I’m waiting and I’m empty!


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brandasaur 5 years ago from Planet X

Oh! I felt the pain with the words in here.

I know it's too hard to be fooled. And this really bothers me, why do some guy/girl out there really can't be so faithful with their partners? Why do they need to find another? Isn't one enough?

For you my friend, I know moving on is too hard. Very hard because I felt it before. But once you moved on, for sure, you'll find another one that is better for your love and will love you, only you! Don't be too sad. Remember, endings are beginnings of beautiful things.


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gracefaith 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Totally get that :(


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Lanzskie 5 years ago from Wales, United Kingdom Author

Brandasaur,

I wrote this poem at the age of 17. I appreciate your advice but I now moved on. Please follow me here as I will post all of my poems soon! :)


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Lanzskie 4 years ago from Wales, United Kingdom Author

Brandasaur,

I wrote this poem at the age of 17. I appreciate your advice but I now moved on. Please follow me here as I will post all of my poems soon! :)


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Lanzskie 4 years ago from Wales, United Kingdom Author

Thank you for your comment gracefaith!

It is really hard! :(

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