Poem.It’s You’re Fate

Those tiny

victories

You believed

That you had

them all

Securely won

Again

In your mind

There you are

coming back

for more

The lies

you told

As the

revelations

Unfold

They now

seems to be

Lingering

with you

A symbol

of your

New day

Being born

In Sin

Being shaped

in Iniquity

Transformed

Into a new way

Facing your

fate

You thought

you had

The battle won

Can’t run from

Yourself

Life will always

Be the mark

Represented

by your

shadow

As it stalks

your every

move

Following you

with only

one thing

To prove

You have it

all to gain

None to lose

Can’t face

your fears

This life

is now

Can’t call

no truce

It’s not tomorrow

Stumbling in your

Sorrows

In this realm

There is no

make believe

What you give

Is exactly

What you will

Receive.

Put your money

In the bank

With hope of

Safety

And added

interest

Can one

put evil

Into life

Expecting huge

Progress

It’s appointed

Onto man

Once to die

After death

comes the

strife

Judgment.

Face your life

The love of

Money

Which the Bible

Says

Is the “root” of all?

Evil.

And the master

Of money

None other

Than the Devil.

Bless

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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks and beautifully said . well the truth is how else is truth supposed to be known.

Appreciate your truthful comments.

Bless.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

We'd all have so much more if we had less greed and were happy with what is given us. The basics like health, happiness and love.


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks Caroline . Yes the obsession takes over everything that's good, and center life around money. That is so sad.

But I see a great day coming.

thanks for all you heartfelt comments , keep writing !

Bless.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

I like the message of your poem Sky. People are too obsessed with money. It rules people too much. Great poem. :)


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks "AE" "YOU ARE SURE CORRECT" If you see the real strategy behind what was going on . And you could not easily change it , while they were destroying their own people, and paying nothing in wages , the few who had were gobbling up everything.

Now they have gotten so far, how do you pull them back. You can't.

Bless.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

I agree Sky. Greed has taken over the world. The fate of those who put money first is scary. A man's fate can be changed... Cheers


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

They say the early bird catches those juicy worms , and I guess you wanted to share the only worm you caught!.

That's a riddle and a cliche in one . Thanks for the read and as always your attention to detail in commenting.

Bless.

Guess on these when you were sleeping I was busy writing , am operating in spurts now.

When anything changes with me the world would know .


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Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

Sky there was no easy way to say it// it's our fate... I believe this poem starts and stirs the primitive feelings we have inside because we do as we feel without thinking.. I like the wording and the message It's all our fate :)

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