It’s You (poem)

It’s you the music beating in my heart

For you the scent which carries me away

And when again the heaven greets my day

By you the wonder thrills my world does start

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It’s you the reason running through my soul

For you the soothing which removes all doubt

And when a dream does hunger for control

By you I feel what Joy is all about

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The dawn may find its meaning in the sun

While wishes turn to hope to make them true

Each passing breath a new one has begun

The breath of dawn the wish of loving you

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It’s you which brings me purpose to maintain

By you forever always I’ll remain

Do Not watch video without someone to hug.

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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

Beautifully crafted. Wonderful emotions... "By you I feel what Joy is all about" - that line really hit me. That is love.

Thank you for this.


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LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

So sweet and full of love! This has a wonderful flow and written from the heart. Loved it, MH! Thanks for sharing ..... :)


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A lovely poem of love and so dearly expressed.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Aww.Such a sweet sweet poem. It is really beautiful. The rhyming is amazing.It has a good flow, and the vocab usage is really good. The emotion is portrayed brilliantly. An excellent job! Keep it up!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful poem, Martin. I don't have someone to hug at the moment, but I'm going to watch the video anyway!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

So very lovely words to hear from someone . . . it's you! Very passionate.

Lovely video. No one to hug around at the moment, but I will watch it anyway.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Thank you for this it was beautiful and wonderful !


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The true meaning of love, long may it wave...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. So romantically wonderful. Passing this on.


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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

What a beautiful and romantic poem. I love the photo at the top - so expressive. Voted up and shared!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Martin! I watched the video and felt their love..wonderful!


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Anil and Honey 3 years ago from Kerala

Nice,beautiful.words are pebbles,and smooth.thanks for sharing.


Beth37 3 years ago

I hope you read this to her. Don't let it sit here on HPs.


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stephanieb27 3 years ago from United States

Voted up and beautiful! :)


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

The words dance on the paper when you turn

your hand to write.

Do your write these wonders or is some muse whispering words

of love?

Your talent for love's poetry is astonishing!

DJ.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Great sonnet Martin, well done and thank you.

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