Just what i needed

 hat tip..

sweat drip

hand out

dance now

sweep me

dir-ty

shut door

bare floor

toe curl

head whirl

heat rush

mouth hush

lip bite

feels right

seems wrong

our song

lay back

skin smack

wall shove

not love

heart vex

just sex

feel it

that's it

breath stare

right there

don't stop

core pop

feels nice

go twice

slam door

still more

no end

chair bend

legs rise

so high

sweet throb

oh god

ripped dress

oh yes

pull hair

get there

so close

let go

sheet grip

juice drip

can't breathe

suck teeth

breathe out

name shout

pace set

need met

core shake

skin quake

calm down

breathe now

clothes on

get gone

eyes closed

sweet dose

games done

i won.

 

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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Hey Pink, how was the one night stand? :P :) That was pretty cool. Never considered writing anything in this manner, yet your creativity definitely did right. Nicely done. :) :D


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Just_Rodney 5 years ago from Johannesberg South Africa, The Gold Mine City

Great read, right tempo and cadence.

Tweeted this.


JadedLove 5 years ago

I AGREE with Cagsil on your style. feeling your feelings pouring out of your words of flowing rivers


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

ive been tweeted?! im so excited!!! lol. thanx cags, there was no one night stand though, lol.


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

PU,

boom chicka chicka bom boom boom whah whah wwhhaaahhh

*squeah squeak squeak squeak*moans screams shudders pants moans

screams shouts polka music n dancing-yea

Net one Pink...TH


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

tom- stop it with the polka music, your turning me on. lmao. get the bagpipes out, and im done. hahaha.


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

pINK,

mY NEIGHBOR ACTUALLY PLAYS THE PIPES... NO JOKE - i'LL SEE WHAT i CAN DO...

th


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

NICE! 2 worded sentences can say so much. this was all it needed. Very naughty. straight to the point. leave em hanging girl, wanting more. you'll win everytime!


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Two Poles 5 years ago from Morgantown, West Virginia

The rhythm here is flawless


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

thanks two poles muah!


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

Pink,

I wrote a new hub-"White

crocodile" tell me what ya think...

TH

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