Kiss Of Memories (tanka)

There under the tree

Another young couple meet

Which makes one wonder

As they share eternal kiss

The nature of memories


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Lovely tanka - lovely words - fusing love and nature - and those eternal memories...thank you


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Thank you for those memories.....shared :-)


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful, Martin!


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

That brings back the memory of seeing my soldier the first time after being gone. Powerful feelings. We could not stop kissing, right in public, which we never did! Nothing else mattered. Thanks for the memory.


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very beautiful my friend !


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Now this is lovely and passionate, and I remember those days of being under that tree.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

That was a very lovely poem.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ah, yes, reminds me of days gone by...


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Happy memories!

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