Lay Down Your Head (poem)

Lay down your head beside its afterglow

And marvel at the things we left behind

For here and up ahead we are consigned

All else now forms a backdrop of our show

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Lay down your head by world which we defined

Its truth is hidden deep within our flow

A beauty only we may come to know

A vision only our own fate assigned

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The world may shout why didn’t you do more

And shine their golden medals in our face

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The reasons for it all is hard to trace

Some words some other person might have said

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So different is life which we have lead

Lay down your head our dream of all before

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Martin, beautifully done as always!... There are always sadness when we reflect on the past, but we must each travel our own path to fulfill our destiny.

Very moving poetry. I hope all is well with you, my very best as always.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful poetry and video Martin, funny how we remember the past when we lay down our head's, hopefully the good memories. Loved your words, very meaningful...


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Martin, your words and this music video stirs a passion in my

mind and heart, from a time and place from so very long ago.

The melancholy closes around me.

Would I do it all over again?

Would I change the decisions which have brought me to this

point in my life?

Your words make me ponder............

You are the poet master.

DJ.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely poem, Martin. We could all do more than we have, but would we, if we had the chance to do it all over again?


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Martin, I was deeply moved by this.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very moving, Dear Mh. When we think about all that we could have done and not have wasted so much of our lives ... but we are here in this present day, so there is always hope.

Up and more and sharing

Blessings, Faith Reaper


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Thanks for this beautiful, moving poem!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Lay Down Your Head beautiful poetry from I am glad you are still writing and sharing your work with such great efforts.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

To dream, to reminisce, all is before us, at our feet for all to see...

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