"Let me be the one"

"Let me be the one"

Let me be the one that love you forever more, and constant beat at your hearts door.
Let me be the one that love you forever more, and constant beat at your hearts door.

"Let me be the one"

Let me be the ears that listen to your heart when it sings

Let me be that sexy voice that call your name.

Let me be the one that love you, forever more

And constant beat at your hearts door.

Let me be the one to hold you, when you're in pain

And let you feel true love again.

 Let me kiss you ,caress you and hold you tight

And make beautiful passionate love to you all night.

Let me be the air you breathe

And every fantastic goal you achieve.

Let me be the inspirations of your life to live

And the sensual sensations, I want you to feel.

Let me be every beat of your heart

That keeps your motor runinng and your engine on start.

Let me be the charismatic aroma, you continuously smell

and the breeze that blows and make your boat sails

Let me be the only reason for the smile on your face

And the victorious winner of a loving race.

Let me be your  beginning that never ends

I'm the  essence of love and your loving friend.

Benny Faye Douglass


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you for your comment and feedback. creativeone59


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ek ellis 6 years ago

Beautifully written, love it :)


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Paulgc, for your wonderful comment and feedback. Godspeed. creativeone59


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Travelman_1971, it means a lot to me to have your comment and feedback. I'll will have to get back with on the lyrics thing, Ok. you have a very blessed day. creativeone59


paulgc 6 years ago

creativeone59, you are as creative as your user name suggests, well done, very nice poem.


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travel_man1971 6 years ago from Bicol, Philippines

It's like a song to me, creativeone59. Can I make the lyrics for this lovely poem "Let Me Be The One"? I really like the meaning of the whole poem. And thanks for always the early hubber in commenting my simple hubs.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

you are very welcome dear, I hope you enjoyed it. thank you for stopping my hub, please come back. Godspeed. creativeone59


bluetiger1520 6 years ago

I needed that poem. Thank you!


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

I'm blessed to have such great fans with great comments and feedback. thank you all so much, you have really made my day. creativeone59


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judydianne 6 years ago from Palm Harbor, FL

This is another poem that needs to be set to music! Beautiful!


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GoldiString 6 years ago

I hope you inspired your someone special with your sweet poem my friend.

- You will be his inspiration for life to live.-

Take care always my friend.


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Hello, hello, 6 years ago from London, UK

Oh, creativeone59, this is really something. It is fantastic. Thank you for writing it.


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Aqua 6 years ago from California

Very, very nice! You really are creative. :-)


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Veronica Allen 6 years ago from Georgia

This is absolutely beautiful creativeone59. Your love and passion literally shines through by way of this poem. This is just awesome!


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

You're welcome, you can do it, since you have a desire to do it, then it must be an inward gift that you, haven't brought in to reality yet, Godspeed. creativeone59


Royal Diadem 6 years ago

Thank's for answering. I am going to try to learn to write poetry!


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you so much, that bravo, made my day. thanks for your comment and feedback. creativeon59


suiteorchids 6 years ago

love it! Bravo!!


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

You all for all of the comments and for your feedback. I do love my husband , he's one in a million and God blessed me with him. Godspeed. creativeone59


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DeBorrah K. Ogans 6 years ago

Creativeone59!

This was passionately Wonderful! Love truly is marvelous! Again simply Beautiful! Thank you for sharing! Blesssings!


ivori 6 years ago

Beautiful! I do believe you are in love.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you all for your wonderfully blessed comments and feedback, it touches my heart. creativeone59


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Putz Ballard 6 years ago

Wow, this is absolutely wonderful, such passion!

Robert Ballard


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maven101 6 years ago from Northern Arizona

Lucky is the man that beholds your passionate love...Thank you for this lovely expression of a woman's love...Larry


Royal Diadem 6 years ago

I love poetry; I desire to learn how to write poetry, do you have any suggestions?

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