Looking At You

More Than What Meets The Eye

A mirror image of all sorts

Shining in the light

To far away to the touch

Vivid In detail

Erie and Still

I watch as you perform

You and I are one

I am always close by

Watching you as you do me

I am more than just a shadow

I am all that you see


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Interesting about Looking At You and so meaningful thanks


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Chuck RitenouR 3 years ago from Front Royal, Virginia

Very nicely done.....


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

DDE What we see may be different from what others view.Chuck RitenouR Sometimes it takes a few looks and a different emotion that can change what we see.Thanx so much for commenting and sharing your thoughts.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful sentiments.


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Very beautiful poem, Dream-On! Different style from your others! Thanks for sharing!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee Feelings are powerful and strong. Learning what makes them develop and to see the path they lead me. Is a step in the right direction.kidscrafts Staying true to myself and sharing my new adventures as they transform me.Thanx so much for reading and sharing.

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