Love Questions

To Jump or not to Jump

My stomach flutters

when I think of you.

My heart beats fast

what can I do?

To make you notice

and see the real me?

The me that is full of

love wanting to be free.

Images of you

consume my mind.

Can we possibly be

two of a kind?

Passion I feel,

Do you feel it too?

What is the next step?

What would you do?

Do we let it go and

wonder what could've been?

Or do we ride a head

and see what happens?

Will it be a blissful

and erotic ride?

Or will it die down

like the ocean's tide?

Can I be brave again,

and take the chance?

What the hell, come on

you and I lets dance.

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Comments 13 comments

Ghaelach 5 years ago

Hi 4elements.

I like this hub. It reminds me of a young girl in love and in a flutter as love is in your teens.

UP/B

Take care 4elements and have a nice day.

LOL Ghaelach


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you Ghaelach, It does take you back to being young and falling in love, Believe it or not I still feel it even at my age, which Ill just say is NOT a teenager, lol blessings friend!


Ghaelach 5 years ago

I'll just say wait till you are as long in the tooth as i am.

By the way i've still got them.

LOL Ghaelach


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you my friend, a blessing you are to my hubs, peace, love, and light!


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dinkan53 5 years ago from India

Remembered my school days, "It's amazing how someone can break your heart, but you still love them with all the little pieces." unfortunately it was a failure. Great composition and I just love it. vote up and beautiful!


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you dinkan53, this was really about being let down so many times before, and finding the courage to jump again. thank you for the comment


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

This wonderful, and fresh. It goes goes there and asks - can we just do it?" LOL. Sometimes love needs to be frank and matter of fact. This hub fits the bill. I loved this poem. I am going to put it on Facebook and twitter. :)


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Keith Matyi 5 years ago from Denton, TX

Good poem! Ahhh the feelings of a young lover. Takes me back to the day...


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you Astra and Keith, you are right sometimes blunt is best and younger years when bravery is what you needed. Even at my age now when love hits I feel like this, blessings to you both.


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago

I come myself and take that dance

not funny, when I take that chance

emotions of a love gone turning into flirting romance

wanting to end this piece, but you grab my hands and tell me to finish our Waltz!

Great! lovely reminder...that we are still young at heart 4Elements!

Lord


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you de cross. Its great to feel so young and remember the first time love bit you. Love will always make you young. Blessings


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderfully felt poem. voted up and beautiful.


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you writer20. Apparently it has invoked a lot of feelings with people. A great compliment. Blessings

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