Love's rules [Poem]

Love makes me good and bad in the same breath

Love makes me different, but maybe, for the first time, I am myself

Love doesn't know means, ain't got means

Love is a chance that comes by chance

Love is when you look into your partner's eyes and you aren't lost anymore

Which 'rule' do you prefer?

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leann2800 5 years ago

I love the last line about love. :)Up and beautiful


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WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

Oh to be young again. Great love song, brother.


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Donna Sundblad 5 years ago from Georgia

I love the last line, too. It's my favorite!


loaqucious laura 5 years ago

Nice job capturing the inner self and the challenges and fullness of love.


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rambansal 5 years ago from India

yes, love comes per chance only..


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rebeccamealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Short but very sweet


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

love is...great poem...so many thing to learn about love...


mathira 5 years ago

Love makes our meaningful and your poem about it was touching.


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Lorenzo27 5 years ago from Pistoia, Italy Author

I'm glad that you like it. Thanks for your comments!


time2rite 5 years ago

Very beautiful; I voted "up"! I love the "chance that comes by chance" part.


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katyzzz 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Beautiful, well done


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rjsadowski 5 years ago

Finding true love is like finding the piece that completes the puzzle.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

Very sweet


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twilanelson 5 years ago from Carmichael, California

Very nice poem, sounds like true love. Thank you !


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davenmidtown 5 years ago from Sacramento, California

Ti Amo


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d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

Good poem. Few words with lots of meaning.


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Bella Nina 5 years ago from USA

Awww ~ so sweet. I loved it Lorenzo!


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shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

Hello Lorenzo! A very small but beautiful Love poem. I loved reading it and I liked the last line of your Poem. Very true and Thanks for sharing with us.:)

voted up, awesome, interesting.

with Respect

from SHANAYA:)


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DFiduccia 4 years ago from Las Vegas

This poem says a lot in so few words.

...voted up—DF


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Lorenzo27 3 years ago from Pistoia, Italy Author

Thanks everybody for stopping by and for your kind comments!

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