My True Love

Sweet sun

Beauty and Youth

Romance and love

The freedom of it all

For it to never end

A dream come true

That sweet smile

Releasing everything

Within me

Just hoping that it will

Come true

All the happiness in

The world

You with me

I with you

My love

Your are my truth

My everything

Bringing me

Maddening

Joy

Love and beauty

Filling my heart and

My world

There's a mystery

To it

A mysticism

Undetermined

I hold you

Within me

With everything

I am forever

With you

In your heart


Love Scene from The Great Gatsby

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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Caroline! Have i guessed you've found joy in your life? Wonderful...


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Ruby! Thank you for taking out the time and reading my dear friend. Glad you are well. I'm just a romantic dreamer. Maybe one day... :)


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Perspycacious 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Hoping that always exploring's guess is true for you. I enjoyed the open depth of expression, for that is what emotions love stirs at the outset with its joy of the moment and hopes for the future. Sad it is that some expect every future day to be like that, when reality dictates otherwise. "Mature Love" is better, and no less glorious when we truly ponder and understand it.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hello Perspycarious for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your thought provoking comment and wish. I wish you all the best dear friend. :)


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Romantically touching!


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btrbell 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful poem! Romantic and hopeful! I enjoyed the movie except! Up+


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

this was amazingly beautiful.. awesome


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up. So romantically beautiful.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Romantic and beautiful.


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

That's beautiful. Gastby is the inspiration, I take it?


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

True love is rare and once you have it that is a greatest blessing of all hold on to love and enjoy great poem.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

A truly touching romantic poem. Peace.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Manatita44 thank you very much for your kind words. :)

Btrbell thank you for your kind words. :)

Frank Atanacio thank you for your kind words. :)

Gypsy Rose Lee thank you for your kind words. :)

BlossomSB thank you for your kind words. :)

Shanmarie thank you for your kind words. :)

DDE thank you for your kind words. :)

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