My Promise (poem)

My dear my love my world my precious soul

Please take my hand that I may bless your life

And be your shield for any future strife

To be that piece of life that makes you whole

-

That every day you walk through will be bliss

And all your needs I’ll meet to see you smile

An at your feet such wonders I’ll compile

Your dream your heaven paradise my this

-

But though I dream alas I’m just a man

A man whose dream right now holds only you

Tomorrow’s dream may change oh yes it’s true

But for this dream I’ll do what legends can

-

All this I wish plus love that will not die

But I can only promise this I’ll try

More by this Author


Comments 15 comments

wetnosedogs profile image

wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Pretty words and the song is a great touch. Also love that picture.


Faith Reaper profile image

Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Oh, so very beautiful is this poem. I love your poetry. Well done. In His Love, Faith Reaper


aviannovice profile image

aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This was most impressive. Awesome and up.


lrc7815 profile image

lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Very tender and moving. Great job!


Janhorner 4 years ago

Simply beautiful. Such endearing words from a true poet.

Jan


shara63 profile image

shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

as honestly you expressed your feelings to your love & so honestly you accepted the truth of man's dreams ..."Tomorrow’s dream may change oh yes it’s true" ........Wonderful saying!


Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

This was so beautiful and romantic. Love the pic and video.


Michele Travis profile image

Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

mhatter,

gentle and lovely.

Words with so much meaning.

Voted up.


kashmir56 profile image

kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

A very awesomely written poem. great video has well !

Vote up and more !!!


always exploring profile image

always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful love poetry. I love that picture!!


LaThing profile image

LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

This poem felt soft and tender! Beautiful words with so much truth to it.... Loved it, M!


suzettenaples profile image

suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful poetry and beautiful images!


Ann1Az2 profile image

Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

How romantic and I'm relieved to know that you know it's just a dream! lol Seriously, though, the sentiment is very heart-felt.

Voted up.


janshares profile image

janshares 4 years ago from Washington, DC

Ahh, my heart flutters :-) I had to read it twice. You put me in the mind of William Blake. So lovely. Thank you.


Glenis Rix profile image

Glenis Rix 8 months ago from UK

Martin, you always find great pics to accompany your poetry.

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working