One Little Move Makes A Big Difference

Don't Look Back Look Ahead

We all have the same amount of time in one day

No more no less

It is our choice to do what we want

Some people are strict and follow a straight course

If they are too rigid they may find problems and boredom in the monotony of each day

If they are too relaxed they can go off course and lose focus and desire

If we are smart we will learn to combine the both

Turning every problem into a discovery

Where we are jumping for joy instead of being confused and lost

There is no end to the creativity we can activate

Even though one day doesn't change much from the day before

if we look back over the years we can see

How much we have changed and all the success we have made

So take this moment and pray

That we may continue to make great strides

In not just one direction but many

Finding love and friendships that pave the way


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Another insightful commentary about life Dream On. You are a wise man.


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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

Jodah That was so nice of you. I think I am a kind hearted soul that wishes he was a comedian. So he could make everyone laugh at life instead of cry.I am thrilled to have you read the words I type. I keep learning a little each day. Fortunately I forget more than I remember that makes me laugh at my own words and keep trying to find an answer. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am once again filled with hot air that will take me high up in the sky where I can view all there is to see and love life more and more when it smiles back at me.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Dream on, this poem is a great inspiration and a reminder to reflect on life with renewed love and zeal. Please see "too rigid" and " too relaxed". Perhaps typing errors, excuse me on this count for pointing out. Loved reading this beautiful hub.


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MsDora 2 years ago from The Caribbean

So true! Even one little move per day adds up to a big difference in a few days. Thanks for the relevant, powerful message.


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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

Harishprasad I am so happy when someone reads one of my poems I have so many thoughts that come in my mind and if I don't write them down they fly faster than a flock of scared birds. I appreciate all the help with my grammar and any tips and suggestions. We all have our faults and shortcomings. I try to spend most of my time developing my strengths and this way I will be a better person and develop both physically and mentally. MsDora In my life I have been so busy that I could not even notice I have matured and have changed. Years later I believed I was the same person even though all the new experiences I have had continued to change me inside and out. So I thought maybe other people feel the same way. Thank you both for your comments and suggestions. Wishing you a day filled with growth, new opportunities and endless pleasures.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

My closest and my dearest friends as well as all the fantastic online friends I've made are what get me through most of my days and bring so badly needed smiles.


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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee Most of my day I spend with my wife sharing our ups and downs that happen.I find myself turning to the HubPages to use my creative energy and inspiration. Many of the hours during my day don't seem to change my world.They are routine and most people would find that boring. I keep looking to find a diamond in the rough.It is only a matter of time.Thank you so much for reading and making Hubpages special.

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