Our Little Heaven

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Our little sacred place

A piece stored away

A secret playground

For us to play

Being with you here

Amongst the clouds

I sing to you

Across the heavens

We in our union

Shining brighter than

The stars

As we look into each other's

Eyes

The sun and moon beam overhead

Laying a golden nest

Weaving it's tendrils

Among all the rest

Warmth fills me from all sides

A safe haven for us both

Our little corner

In this huge dark world

If only I could stay here

Just a little bit longer

With you

In heaven

Forever

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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Beautiful imagination, and a safe warm heavenly corner, a very small but beautiful wish, Amen.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

my goodness this was very good kind of sad too but I loved it :)


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Those precious moments in that groove of perfect contentment, yet haunted by the reality of our return to the mundane tasks. Life is a series of wonderful highs, a few (we hope) lows and it is that and the life in the middle ground that makes the highs so wonderful.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

Very beautiful and if we could only all stay in that part of heaven for just a little while, how grand it would be. Thanks for this emotional and beautiful work.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

beautiful Caroline , soft and smooth write.


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Robwrite 4 years ago from Bay Ridge Brooklyn NY

Lovely. Great imagery.

Well done,

rob


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A lovely poem. It would be lovely to stay there, but there are things that need to be done. Voted up.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Heavenly bliss..Beautiful Caroline..


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful. Caroline, this was such a beautiful and touching poem. You are your special gift. Reminds me of "innocence" and "purity."


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Beautiful. To be there forever... Is it even possible?


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Girishpuri thank you very much for the comment and read. :)

@ Thank you Frank. I'm happy you liked it. :)

@ Hi Xstatic thank you very much for the comment and read. :)

@ Hi Whonu thank you for reading and your lovely comment. :)

@ Hi Michael thank you for visiting and commenting. :)

@ Hi Rob thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)

@ Hi Blossom LOL Yes there are. Thank you for stopping by. :)

@ Hi Ruby thank you. :)

@ Hi Thelyricwriter thank you for the sweet compliment and read. :)

@ Hi Mhatter maybe there's some way. LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)


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cainsurance 4 years ago from Santa Clara

How romantic!!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you CA. :)


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Such a love feeling being in that place. It is easy to want to stay there and forget the world, but we must always return to save up for the next visit!


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

A pleasing paradise for two.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Such lovely words. Our skies just opened up and it's raining cats and dogs. Your words gave images of sunny skies.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Curiad. :)

Thank you Mc. :)

Thank you Gypsy. :)


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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Beautiful Carol. I love how the words flow in the reflection of a naive soul.

Up and awesome!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Cris :)

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