Perfect (poem)

Those perfect dreams

Those perfect themes

Those perfect lies on movie screens

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Perfect days

Perfect ways

Perfectly bidding till nothing remains

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Perfect solutions

To perfect confusions

Perfectly happen at others command

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We’re perfectly lost

We’re perfectly tossed

We’re perfectly drowning in tide pool we’re caught

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Perfect perfect

Missing respect

Tales to protect

Which might affect

Paths we select

Freedom’s effect

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Worst of all

How it affects how I love you

Freely and completely

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No one to reflect

No milestone to set

No limitations we might regret

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Just your perfect smile

To our perfect while

And maybe the rest will follow in style

Music only

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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

Awesome!


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

For some reason, 'perfect' never stays perfect for very long.

Wonder why?

Nice poem for this Monday morning.

Stay warm. It is only 72*, right now. Burrrrr! :-)

DJ.


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Ryem 2 years ago from Maryland

This is poem is perfect!


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

A perfectly beautiful poem, great write.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A great poem once again Martin.

Eddy.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

The perfect poem about what's perfect.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Perfection is our aim, but how rarely we achieve it, and perhaps it's best that way. Love your poem.


Ben Blackwell 2 years ago

@ Vkwok

You put it well.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Your poetry is pure perfection.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Perfectly beautiful! Up and more and sharing. Blessings, Faith Reaper

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