Poem - I Don't Stand

You know
Don't you?
You see my picture
A Yuppie
Clean-cut
Straight
Selfish
Greedy
No problems
Just endless opportunities
But why do you think that?
Are you prejudiced?
Well?
Are you?
Is it possible
That maybe
Just maybe
I'm mad too?
That I can relate to you?
Do I have the right
To swear?
To hate?
To be angry?
Or am I too clean?
Yeah
I'm clean
I have my act
I'm boring
At times
I go with the flow
I don't rock the boat
I drink Chardonnay
At the dinner party
As the guests pretend
To be worldly
Because they stood
In Paris
Or Milan
But have they ever stood
In Harlem?
Or East Austin?
At night?
That's worldly
Why?
Because it's real
I haven't stood there
Because I'm scared
But I think about it
All the time
And I wonder
Do I have the right
To be angry?
Can I write a rap poem?
Can I think like them?
Or does my clean
White
Face
Disqualify me?
I want to be mad
Here
Now
Today
And I will be mad
Not because I'm white
Not because I'm not black
But because I know
Yeah
I know
And I hate that I know
And still smile
With my white wine
And my pretend world
Yeah
It doesn't mean shit
Neither does this
Because I don't stand
In the ghetto

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Bel Marshall 5 years ago from Michigan

I love, love LOVE this line in particular

"That's wordly

Why?

Because it's real"

Good stuff here.


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

This is so reminiscent of early sixties poetry. It has punctuation... they didn't. It has capitalisation... theirs didn't. But it has all the impact that theirs did. Well done.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Bel... to me real is where emotions that are personal live... happy is real but pain is VERY real and the East side harbors much pain...


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Twilight... interesting about puncuation... I'm not even sure I punctuate properly but I guess that's part of my style...


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Tammy L 5 years ago from Jacksonville, Texas

Very interesting. I couldn't help but think about the show "Good Times" when reading this and one episode in particular. The Evans family experienced a different type of prejudice. JJ's girlfriend's parents didn't like him because his family did live in the ghetto. They saw no way for JJ to ever leave the ghetto until JJ's mother showed these snobs a few of JJ's paintings. That episode was touching as well as humorous.

Nice poem!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Tammy... I probably have some friends (more like acquaintances) who wouldn't like my somewhat overt stab at their superficiality but that's what I felt on this one... I am VERY tired of pretension and how so many people attempt to gain credibility on the basis of their travels... in other words where they have stood...


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kimh039 5 years ago

Nicely done, Suburban Poet. I can relate so very much, and can understand and value many lifestyles. Sometimes I get tired of superficiality, and sometimes I seek refuge in it! Sometimes I find urban living refreshing and sometimes very limiting.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you kimh,

What I hope people realize is that sometimes I deliberately take a certain point of view and then prioritize it to make the point.... as you appear to say we do swing from time to time to different mind-sets. I have to admit drinking the Chardonnay and being superficial... but at times I need to snap out of it; not to be an insufferably self-rightous person but to be more conscious of a greater world around me....


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Adela Rasta 5 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

This is a brilliant poem. You cut through all the pretentiousness and get right to the heart of the matter and the beauty (sometimes scary, but always real) of the real world.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Adela... I read your bio and from your background I take your respect and approval with pride... thanks..


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lilibees 5 years ago

As always awesome poems, I love reading them!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you lilibees... I really appreciate that...


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Extinct Soul 5 years ago from 14°35'N 121°0'E

very nice

yeah

the poem

love it

though i don't want

to copy it

it stayed

printed on my mind

and now

i'm writing

like this too

hihihihi ^_^

thank you!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Extinct... I am flattered that you wish to emulate my style... just say what you feel and make each line as impactful and succinct as possible and you will provide us with great work...


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

this is truly great, the style slices through pretensions and delivers a strong message- full of genuine emotion. Loved it! thanks for sharing.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Docmo - thank you so much for the comment... I truly appreciate it...


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jrsearam 5 years ago from San Juan, PR

You recognize and reveal what is common to us all. If you can do that, it doesn't matter that you don't stand in the ghetto. I was moved by your poem. JR


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@jrsearam - thank you for the comment... it is just a matter of looking around, taking off you biased glasses and understanding what is happening in the world... I don't want to live an insulated and phoney life...


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LaurieDawn 5 years ago

We often do what we must to live in the society's chains that have surrounded us. And then every now and again we break free of those chains and live as tho there were no tomorrows! Your prose brings to mind all the things we do in this life that are expected of us, and all the things that we never speak about.

I loved it. I thought it was beautiful and so very true.

Blessings,

Laurie


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Laurie - thank you very much and I'm glad you understood my point here....

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