Poem - Submission

We must make love
Before we ever touch
We must make love
As we talk
We must make love
Whenever we walk
Together
Or alone
Always on our mind
As a gentle breeze
Capturing your heart
With love
With allure
With anticipation
Even as we wait
Knowing our bodies
Will please the other
Because
That is what matters
Let me be your lover
Let me take you there
You must know
That I crave you
I cannot stop
Thinking of you
Imagining
How you will be
The singular focus
Of my need
To engulf you
Can no longer be denied
And so
It is time
To be still
It is time
To be silent
It is time
For you to submit
To me
We have gazed upon one another
We have bared our souls
We have been equals
Now it is time
For me to be your man
And to be a man
The way you want me to be
The way that I am
You don't have to tell me what to do
I know what you want
I know how you want it
And that is what I want
So it is time
For submission
To be beautiful
To be desirable
To be open
To let me run free
In your life
In your mind
In your garden
Let me control you
Let me turn the key
And open the door
To the way a man
Loves a woman
It is time for me
To carry you
It is time for me
To seduce you
It is time for you
To submit
To my lust
To my desire
To my need
To make love to you
As long as it takes
For your
Exhaustion
For your
Glistening
Beads of sweat
For your
Climax
Yes
As long as it takes
I will never tire
Because
All I want
Is to make you
Remember
And want more
Every night
I will be your man
I am not beating my chest
It is my heart that beats
In pursuit
Of you
My prey
Let me kiss your neck
Let me turn you
Away
So I can touch you
All over your body
Let me turn you
And see your body
And draw you to me
Let me pull you
To me
So I can touch you
And kiss you
Ravenously
Like an animal
Overwhelming you
With my passion
As you have never felt
Passion
Dominating your mind
So you will forget
Your lessons
Of childhood
So you can be a woman
And make love to me
Your man

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Pachuca213 5 years ago

Very nice!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Pachuca... I've already added some lines and I have a feeling this thing may continue to grow...


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

Breathtaking!

this is simply beautiful


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azure_sky 5 years ago from Somewhere on the Beach, if I am lucky :)

Beautiful! Absolutely delicious. Can't wait to read your added lines....I imagine this is one that will continue to grow.


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Passionate! Irresistable!


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Lucky woman!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@nighthag - thank you very much... I was thinking about this during a long drive yesterday to see my Dad... the open road must be an aphrodisiac!

@azure-sky - I hope to add some today but you never know... I don't want to do it just to do it.. I have to decide if it is a good enough message as it... I want the reader to feel what is about to happen while maintaining a bit of class and dignity.

@Truckstop Sally - thank you... those are very kind words.

@breakfastpop - maybe; the man though is the lucky one because she has been on his mind non-stop and this is the moment he was been lusting for. She is beautiful and he is about to have his way in a loving and incredibly passionate moment.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Ok all.. I just added more lines....


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azure_sky 5 years ago from Somewhere on the Beach, if I am lucky :)

Exhaustingly passionate, filled with exquisite beauty. Your message came across with class and dignity......Beautifully done.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you again azure_sky... and it may not be over yet...


NikiiLeeReyes 5 years ago

Wow erotic, passionate, this poem was written with such intensity!

I absolutely love it; you have a gift, so keep on giving! ;)


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Nikii... I was imagining the moment and I was alone and it kind of built and built upon itself.... I know what I want...


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Well, you are in complete control of your words as usual. Imagine if you could have written like this in high school (maybe you could have?), you'd have college girls lining up around the block. But I'd wager that work this complete comes with much practice and polish to your craft.

Thanks for the answer to my question.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Hey Doug... thanks for the kudos... no I wasn't a writer back then.... you might be right about the college girls. You know what they say: "if I knew then what I know now..."


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CheyenneAutumn 5 years ago

Poet - This has left me breathless at this point and the anticipation for more is building... I can't wait for your additions!

WOW!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thanks Cheyenne... I thought this might arouse a few folks... I need to see if I can fit more detail in there without becoming graphic... we need to be able to use our imagination... guess I may be a bit old-fashioned on that but I like it that way and it's my poem right?


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CheyenneAutumn 5 years ago

Imagination is the greatest part of it all! And that's NOT old fashioned - just factual. I like it additions or no - it is very good!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

We'll see... got to get "in the mood" again... but not tonight... I'm fighting a cough and I guess that's not the hottest thing in the world to create around...


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland

Very lovely ... and yes, that's what makes this kind of writing so good - the old-fashioned part! Take us just to the edge and let our imaginations fly. Well done and beautiful. Namaste'


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you Erin... I'm not sure if this one is on the edge or if we are already in bed!


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b. Malin 5 years ago

Wow...thank you for the "Poem Sex"...what else is there to say?


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

As James Taylor said: "Don't say yes but please don't say no..."

Thanks b.! Ha....


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland

Oh by old fashioned I meant that it didn't get pornographic, just let our imaginations fly with that! I knew exactly where we were! ;)


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thanks again Erin... I'm trying not to be so bad but lately I keep thinking about this stuff....


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AngRose 5 years ago

Beautiful, passionate, absolutely gorgeous writing.


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LaurieDawn 5 years ago

Simply beautiful. What a lovely prose of surrendering love. Stunning poetry.

Blessings,

Laurie


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you AngRose - I was just trying to capture the man's point of view but I think I set myself up for a big fall! Too much pressure now!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Laurie - thank you for your words... you are too kind... I had fun with this one... pure fantasy that hopefully can be replicated in reality...


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Nayothara 5 years ago

AWESOME and BEAUTIFUL.....

Must make love even before we touch each other!!! Oh WOW! True romance in your blood and amazing the way it came out from you..... I am so happy to see your this beautiful HUB!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Nayothara - thank you for your remarks... yes the loving relationship and feelings should be in place...


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

I'll have night-mares tonight! Great write!


seraphim11 5 years ago

I admire the way you place your writings.. Very beautiful.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Micky - c'mon man this is supposed to be a GOOD thing you know!


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@seraphim - thank you and this is intended to show how a man can respond to a beautiful woman or the woman he loves...


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DIR-ACT 5 years ago from Papendrecht

I like the part where you make "love" to eachother without actually physical contact. It should be a tip to the youth; enjoy that initial feeling, donĀ“t haste yourself.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@DIR-ACT - thank you... I agree


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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

Let me be your lover

Let me take you there

You must know

That I crave you

WOW! I loved all of it!!! That def got me hot. I think you and I are thinking some same thoughts. Thank you for the comments on mine.. I will def be reading more of yours!


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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Mamadrama - I'm glad I saw yours because I forgot about this one... I have to admit just rereading got me going too.... bad boy....


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

@Mamadrama - Nice work! I posted a new one but chickened out and unpublished it....

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