Reflecting Pools (tanka)

Two men sit alone

Reflecting upon the past

In pools at their feet

One cries over all the dids

The other of the did nots


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bravewarrior 11 months ago from Central Florida

Regret is a bitter pill to swallow.


Pearl Sepuya 11 months ago

Do the things you need to do now...never wait because tomorrow may never come. So true what they say.


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AliciaC 11 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is so sad. It's a lovely poem, though.


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ChitrangadaSharan 11 months ago from New Delhi, India

A lot has been expressed in few lines here- Nice Tanka!

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