Reflections in Haiku

Reflections in Haiku

Copyright 2011

Erin Lefey

Breaking through the Earth

Life springs forth in many ways

Reaching for the Sun

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Roots will sprout from seed

With water, sunshine and soil

Renew the planet


Childhood memories

Swimming, laughing, having fun

Hot Bright Summer times


Mother, Great Mother

Teach us how to pray with you

We are your children

Toes in the hot sand

Marching to the warm Key waters

The Sea and I blend


Fish swimming round and

Following my footsteps through

Blue water high tide


Flying high above

I see me walking on shores

Distant and alone


Heavy Summer Love

Breathe In, Breathe Out - So Intense

Can you last through fall?

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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

your words are landscapes

reflections of your beauty

warmth of soul's season.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Elegant and thought-provoking! I love the pictures too.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful. Haiku poetry is a journey. I enjoyed the view. The pictures were perfect. Thank you.

Cheers (:D


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Simply lovely and totally beautiful! Thank you.


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

Footsteps in the sand

memories of past summers

remembered fondly :)


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland Author

Sligobay,

beautiful Haiku, and wonderful comment. Thank you so much!

Martie, thanks so much for visiting and for the great compliments!

Ruby, Thanks, I enjoyed the journey, it was so fun taking you along :)

Acaetnna, thanks for coming by and for the lovely comment!

SilentReed, What a lovely Haiku! This was my first attempt at writing them, you all are so creative!

Take care, my friends!


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, Erin, this was beautiful, I can never get the hang of Haiku, but you did it! lol loved it, cheers nell


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland Author

Thank you Nell, I had forgotten what it was and then when I found out the simple rules for a simple one, I had to try.

3 lines - 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables and it should be about a season, or clearly refer to one without saying it. That was it! I had to take the challenge. Thanks for stopping by, my friend!


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Lovely as a flower Erin,


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland Author

Fossillady, Thanks so much!Take care.

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