Remember When (poem)

Remember when you blew a kiss my way

And dreams were filled with all which we would do

How could we let those times just slip away

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Two youths who put their love upon display

With one grand moment holding their love new

Remember when you blew a kiss my way

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And so alive with life and hope they’d stay

They gave each care each flare each fair its due

How could we let those times just slip away

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As they enhanced such hearts were held in sway

And though they grew this promise lingered true

Remember when you blew a kiss my way

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But then one night her mirror caused dismay

What happened to that youth which once she knew

How could we let those times just slip away

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I held her through the richness of our day

And all the dreams which we had privy to

Remember when you blew a kiss my way

How could we let those times just slip away

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MargaritaEden 3 years ago from Oregon

Such a beautiful poem, I love your choice of the song, suits this poem well, you are a wonderful writer, and I can see a romantic at heart :)


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shara63 3 years ago from Delhi

oh, its long long ago...even i dont remember when for the last time...so, sending it right now..just receive & reciprocate dear!!

Mhatter, its really truly awesome dear!!


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sweethearts2 3 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Our cherished moments turn into our cherished memories. Thank you for your sharing of your most treasured thoughts. They didn't slip away just slipped into your heart.


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lilyfly 3 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

Yes, cherished, diamonds of deep meaning. lily


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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Thank you! Beautiful poem!


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cam8510 3 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

Martin, quite often your poems take me back and help me remember the one true love I had in my life and I thank you for helping keep those memories alive.


Ghaelach 3 years ago

A beautiful poem Martin and one that brings back a lot of youthful memories.

LOL Ghaelach


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Remember when........yes, I remember when....


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Such a beautiful poem and song ! Well done !


Dr Cil 3 years ago

It's just beautiful! When you love someone, time just stands still!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The message is clear, but youth is not everything.


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Tonipet 3 years ago from The City of Generals

Hi Martin. If I could only wish youthfulness in love to never fade, I had wished for it over and over again. That way I can at least be sure that those blows of kisses will not just slip away, but remain as sweet as it always has been. Beautiful poem, thank you.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Wonderful Martin and here's to so many more from you. I wish you a great day and I vote up,across and share all around.

Eddy.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

wow this is such a wonderfully written poem voted awesome!!!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful words and wonderful song. Loved this lots.


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girishpuri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

As usual wonderful piece of poetry, Thank you so much martin.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

This piece is both beautiful and sad. This poem tells me to live in the moment. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Martin, a beautiful villanelle, I love the haunting refrain, and the tender reminiscing. Brilliant as always.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

This is exquisite Martin, thosetender precious moments didn't slip away, they are tucked away in your hearts.

I have not attempted a villanelle, you have written this one perfectly.


Janhorner 3 years ago

I know what you mean by a special moment; sometimes we want it to happen time and time again just to recapture its sweetness. Wonderful words.

Voted up,

Jan


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moonfroth 3 years ago from Rural BC (Canada) & N of Puerto Vallarta (Mexico)

A poignant capture of how fleeting love's moments really are, and how careless we can be as their owners. . . .or do they own us, esp. as we get a little older? You have an easy almost innate sense of the musical cadence of the language. Very well done...thank you.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Unfortunately, love fades. Sometimes it is replaced with criticism and days forgotten of what brought it forth in the first place. Keeping love alive is the key. My key seems to have slipped into the drain.....


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QudsiaP1 3 years ago

Each memory more precious like a jewellery box filled with a string less pearl necklace.

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