Rubber Band

Love is like a rubber band held with both ends by two
When one leaves it hurt

---To I am hurt by love…where I been mistreated…
Not once but twice…throw me in a dungeon where I burn to my death
Buried in a quicksand…my whole body compress…

-------click, crack the sound of crushed bones….

-------squirt, splash the sound of blood splattered…

Oozed….

----crushed ribs…punctured my every organ…

Buried lifelessly in such gruesome death
By the hand of a man she once called her lover…

…..haunting….

-----------a rubber band snap when one leaves--------

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wow! this is a creepy amazing poem.

Vote up and awesome, Joyce.


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FitnezzJim 4 years ago from Fredericksburg, Virginia

Creepy is right, so creepy I'll be looking forward to Chanroth's next article with the hope that it is not this scary.

I sure hope she's 'ok'.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Love can indeed be painful....overwhelming....but man oh man, when we get it right...it is beautiful!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

interesting insight, yet beautiful. Thank you.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

ouch! i HATE when that happens! I'm sorry that it's happened to you twice, my dear! Men can be...ya know..lol..

You definitely paint the picture here!

Love it, if that's appropriate..haha

tweeting,sharing...


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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Very insightful piece. Love could be a scary thing, it could be painful and overwhelming and on the other hand beautiful and exciting.

Keep well.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

You've painted a picture that definitely shows the pain and desolation you can feel when a relationship goes bad, you've left nothing to the imagination...the pain is there! I voted this up and awesome.


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

You are going to be all right, Chanroth. Remain very strong.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Yeah I know what it's like to get struck by a rubberband. Painful as is love. Hang in there better days are coming.

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