Run Lover Run (limerick)

Through flowery field lad does run

So proud of the heart he has won

As their love was molding

This rhyme was unfolding

That’s her husband holding a gun


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

Uh-oh. Run fast.


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suzettenaples 2 years ago from Taos, NM

Wow! I wasn't expecting that ending! So funny.


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drbj 2 years ago from south Florida

If no speed that chummy fellow has got,

Better hope that hubby is a very bad shot.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Oops, his love forgot to clue him in on the hubby who has a gun!


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

Too funny!! Run, Lover, RUN!!


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Great surprise ending!


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

Ha!! He has to run real fast!!


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dghbrh 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

LOL.....what a mind blowing ending here. Up and shared.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Hilarious! He really should have thought things through.


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LadyFiddler 2 years ago from Somewhere in the West

LOL i guess he got more speed when he saw her husband's gun :) ha ha ha


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aviannovice 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

IU can see why he was in such a hurry.

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