She Waits (poem)

She waits for him mid sands he cannot see

His mind and heart are oh so far away

The world he knows has lead them all astray

How can her truth compete with fantasy

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She waits with tears so long were put aside

The flowers in his garden need no rain

So far removed from pleasure and all pain

How much has doubt and fear force him to hide

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She waits amid the silence of a song

A memory so long he has forgot

The life he leads no longer has a plot

How can he wonder when his way went wrong

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But deep at nights when everything abates

And darkness brings new meaning what is real

His soul is kissed by something it does feel

Where now touches forever there she waits

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very lovely. Seems like I read this one before? Love the Madame Butterfly.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

The wait can be longer than she thought so. a lovely poem.


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shara63 3 years ago from Delhi

ahh...long waiting, it happens sometime in love....Simply beautiful!!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Beautiful write! Remembering sweet love; waiting and longing for its return, yet knowing it may never pass this way again.

Sweet pleasures of the night!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Brilliant once again Martin.

Eddy.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

SOme people have been known to hold a candle for decades.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

I think this may have happened to someone I know. Thanks for adding Madame Butterfly.

Sending you more Angels this evening :) ps


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epigramman 3 years ago

A lovely poetic reverie and if you keep writing in this dreamy style

Sir Martin , you will have a long line of Hub ladies and beyond 'waiting' for you to write another one.

LE time 8:22pm


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Moms-Secret 3 years ago from Central Florida

beautiful writing Mhatter. Gorgeous musical accompaniment. Using it to lull my daughter to sleep.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful as always, waiting is the sad part...


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99. .sometimes love comes along and stays..and sometimes love goes awry and strays.. but regardless the "wait and see attitude" it's not a thing we can elude...

Sad but beautifully written...


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Movie Master 3 years ago from United Kingdom

So moving.....

Beautiful writing.

Best wishes Lesley


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful, as always.


ExoticHippieQueen 3 years ago

I noticed your interesting choice of poetry style with the first and last lines rhyming, and the second and third lines rhyming. I tried to find the name for it, but couldn't. I often play with rhyming lines but I am not good on the names of the different styles. I'm sure I accidentally am using some particular type of poetry, but I'm clueless! Beautiful poem, by the way. I was distracting myself on the style too much. My own fault!


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Lovely and so beautifully expressed.

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