Silence Of Hope (poem)

He sat and listened to my songs of pain

And when I cried he washed away my tears

His silence seemed to lay claim to all fears

His silence filled the air with hope’s refrain

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For I had fallen seriously ill

The doctors’ silence heightened my dismay

My world of friends seemed very far away

Except this one who would my darkness fill

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But who was he who deep in silence waits

That shadow of a moment of the past

My eyes unclear of memories he cast

Yet through my heart a meaning he relates

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To some unknown the soul of me was drawn

A silence of a nothing all around

Was then I heard familiar fateful sound

And I awoke to find that he had gone

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MarleneB 3 years ago from Northern California, USA

Deep, dark, filled with extreme emotional impact. This poem, accompanied by the photo and the video has such a strong effect, it left me motionless for the longest time.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Very rich poem, Martin. Beautiful!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very powerful dear Mh, and I understand from where it comes precious heart. You are in my thoughts and prayers always.

Up and more and sharing

God bless you. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

This is a very powerful poem indeed.


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Ericdierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Thank you for a wonderful piece.


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

I thought I'd switch and read a poem this morning and you did not disappoint me. Beautiful work, Martin, and congrats on passing the 100,000 mark in views.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Almost surreal. Nicely done sir.

Kim


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Amazing work, Martin.

The music lent a sad, mournful setting for the poem.

Pardon me, but you expertise is showing.

DJ.


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

Oh Martin, how beautiful and yet painful. I'm a crier for sure and you had me with this one.

Voted up, awesome, and interesting. I'd like to add heartbreaking.


shara63 3 years ago

Pain in all beauty...excellent work!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Deep, dark, and the pain is so isolating, something that cannot be shared.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

A sad, beautiful tale.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Loved this expressive poem.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This says so much, ad the clarity is resounding.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

A deeply moving poem.

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