Something (tanka)

And so it all was

Lying there dead at his feet

The madness of truth

They could have been best of friends

But something got in the way


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh how sad Martin .. you wrote it so beautiful but it sure is sad.

Debbie


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phdast7 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Nice, very evocative.

Theresa


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Mhatter, a Tanka with much sadness and regret, I can't help but wonder at how they got to this point. Beautifully done. I think it's time I had another go.

Thanks for the motivation.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Very moving, Martin. What could have been ....

Sending you Angels this morning :) ps


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

That happens far too often, Martin. So sad.....


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

Wow... hits me hard and makes me think... wonderfully done!


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very beautifully written and moving ! Well done !


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Monis Mas 3 years ago

Sad, moving, very touching...


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lrc7815 3 years ago from Central Virginia

So much sad with so few words. Amazing and very, very sad.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That is a true parable.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Unfortunately a sad but true fact.

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