Star’s Whisper (poem)

What star has brought this feeling over me

My heart my soul excited by a tune

I’m taken by a wind of ecstasy

To heavens dreams and wishes do commune

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Each ticking of a lifetime thrills the air

It’s hard to keep my dance upon the ground

My place in fantasy has opened there

One thought one pulse has captured all around

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The world I knew now very far away

I thought I knew the colors of Joy’s song

But all I knew would sing a brighter day

When melody eternal came along

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What star has set this once was me aflame

The star which was the whisper of your name

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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Truly a beautiful poem, Martin. You you such a way with words.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A great light to the soul and so beautifully written


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

So romantic....a beautiful expression of eternal love.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

This is so beautiful, Martin. If only everyone could feel this way all the time....


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AliciaC 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is such a beautiful poem, Martin. The imagery is wonderful! I love your romance poetry.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Beautifully expressed. Love your poem and the romantic thoughts it conjures.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Such a beautifully romantic poem Martin. I love this song and Westside Story


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

I think most of my first poems come from songs. They talk to our hearts. Very beautiful.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Another beautiful peom..Music brings back so many wonderful memories....


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Amazing poetry, mhatter99!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

When one gives up their dreams, they are too old to see them.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Very nice Martin.

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