Sweetness Without The Wrapper

A Love That Never Gets Old

When I hear the words of a true love story

I couldn't be any happier for that couple at this very moment

Love that exsists and that is bolder than any sign I have ever seen

Peace that fills the heart with a waterfall of emotion that is surprisingly different but the same

A few words spoken at the perfect time can make memories last forever

The years of waiting for a love that is so true and loyal

From here on out the kindess that fills each day and night

The lucky person who got to know you

I can clearly see the love that is as natural as the wood that comes from all trees

The trees stand tall because they know life is reaching for your dreams

A friendship that began one day that escalated from a fantasy turned into a sweet reality

A heard about a thirty year love that waited till the time was right

It made all previous loves stepping stones to a wonderful life

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sonia05 5 years ago from india

Dream On, this is such a beautiful poem. I am truely enchanted. Words beautifully woven by you to create magic of love and friendship!!

thank you for sharing! voted up!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

good one.......


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chander mehra 5 years ago from Delhi

fantasy turning into sweet realit. dream-c0me-true. God bless you.


"Quill Again" 5 years ago

Love this.... very well written... Bravo

Blessings


Lady_Tenaz 5 years ago

Now that is a beautiful story.


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MichaelStonehill 5 years ago

Very nice and kind observatons.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi Dream On, this beautiful poem made me 'Giddy with Ecstasy'

Just fabulous, so voting up and everything!


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Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

Hello Dream On,

I was quite choked up when I read your beautiful hub, because that thirty year love that you speak of is a relationship very near and dear to my own heart...

Cloverleaf.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Movie Master After reading your wonderful poem "Giddy with Ecstasy" I was thinking how nice would it be if I could write about the love you two have in my own words.How precious and sweet and magical.You did such a wonderful job. I wanted to add a little extra beauty.Telling you how you moved me.I couldn't get the feeling out of my head nor did I want to.The whole time I have been on HubPages I have never recieved ten comments in one day.That shows your love is something we all strive for and our so proud to share.Thanx so much.I have only been married 10 years and look forward to another 20 plus.Cloverleaf I hope you keep reading and enjoying my poems of love and fun that lasts forever.Your relationship will always be special and exciting and I am so happy you have the love that grows like flowers in the spring.Michael Stonehill Thank you for your kind thoughts. Lady_Tenaz It was Movie Masters love that warmed my heart."Quill Again" I keep trying to write from the heart and I appreciate your pleasant words very much.Chander Mehra I am glad you liked it.Money Cop Thanx so much for reading my poem.Soniao5 After your comment you must of brought all your friends because I thought I was on the wrong page.When I seen one comment after another.It is so nice to appreciate the wonderful things we see and hear about other people I couldn't wait to express my love for Movie Masters wonderful story.There are so many wonderful people in our lives this is one clear example that shines like a car out of the car wash.A real beauty for all to see and admire.Thanx everyone and have a great day.


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Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

Hi Dream On

You may not know this but Movie Master is my Mum, and so I can vouch for her giddy love!!! I remember the very moment when her 30 year love blossomed again; she did indeed wait until the time is right and I could not be more happy for her. This is the fourth time I have read your poem today, because it has touched me so much. Thank you :-)

Cloverleaf.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Cloverleaf I am so thrilled that you told me the story about your mom.I am at a loss for words for you reading my poem more than once.I am touched.Things like this don't happen to me.I usually write and all I get is that was nice...So I continue to thank you for being real and commenting again:')


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hello Dream On, In your comment above, your wrote you wanted to 'add a little extra beauty' you certainly did that, right down to the wonderful title you chose.

Your wonderful poem, has touched my husband and I so much, oh and Cloverleaf!

Thank you again.

And just to say you so deserve lots of comments, I am a big fan of your poetry.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

This is so beautiful. And a wonderful poem you wrote inspired by Movie Master's lovely story.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Oh How lovely. My husband and I had male friend just past the age of 70 and a female friend almost 60.

The way they ┬┤clicked┬┤almost from the first meetin amazed us.

Their wedding was fantsastic.!!!!


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi Dream On, I have just revisited your hub to find that my 2nd comment isn't there, perhaps I forgot to press the submit button.

I just want to say both Nick and I are so deeply touched that our story moved you to write this wonderful poem, your comment above is very moving, thank you so much.


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Love never gets old but becomes even strong as time passes.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Movie Master Well another day and so many more good things to say.I love all comments and I hope I didn't miss any.You have done more for me than you will ever know.It is so nice to see you still happy and on with bigger and better things to come.Rosemay50 It is amazing how we all can change each others lives a little at a time with kindness in mind.Thanx for sharing your wonderful thoughts and my lovely prayers go out to you.Dim Flaxenwick Each time you give and share and open up a whole new world for me.You see life from a different angle.I feel like I am looking through a wonderful stained glass window of the world.Each of us sees the same world on the other side but each sees the world in a different color.So the reds are vibrant.The yellows are soft.The blues are bold.So many colors so many feelings and thoughts to share.There is no right or wrong just a wonderful life to share.Sending all shineshine and warm weather to all.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Vinaya Ghimire You have found love that is made to last.It is almost like super a glue for people.I live to see love that special.Thanx for everything.

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